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porque agora....

È vero...

CC: Angelus

Goncin,

Há vários erros no original que fazem com que a tradução não faça sentido.
Só para conferir alguns erros, a letra original da música seria:

I'll show you what it takes to feed my mind
while you go through reading all my signs

It was a lovely day
when everything was everywhere
And now love came into season

I didn't know you, life is little dreams you pushed aside
Can we take two to see those eyes we love to hide

At night, alone in bed
with someone else's head
and our love came into season

Take time to make yourself feel good
and you do whatever you want
'Cause you can now in my world
Making up for losing so much time
'Cause you can now in my world

E continua:


We want to take a little walk down this route you know
I'm not scared to, 'cause we get back, we can take it real slow

Another lovely day
When everything was everywhere
And our love came into season

Take time and make yourself feel good
And you do whatever you want
'Cause you can now in my world
Making up for losing so much time
'Cause you can now in my world

I'm gonna make you feel all right
I'm gonna make you hold on tight

Hold on tight

Take time to make yourself feel good
And you do whatever you want
'Cause you can now in my world
Making up for losing so much time
'Cause you can now in my world

Na verdade, lilian, eu também andei procurando pela letra da correta da música e encontrei "só" umas três versões diferentes. A partir disso, preferi ficar com a o texto enviado originalmente.

CC: lilian canale

'agradável ' parece um pouco fraco para 'lovely'
compensando -> diria 'compensar'