Oversættelse - Kinesisk-Engelsk - 所谓最佳实践是指管理思想、信息技术、客户需求的最有效结合，只有不断的追求这样的最佳实践，才能真正帮助...

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Ian and / or pluiepoco, could you take a look and tell me what you think of this tranlsation please? Thanks!

CC: IanMegill2 pluiepoco

Well, the first thing we have to do is put that second part (the part Elain123 put in the notes below the translation) back into the main text: we have to append it after the translation as it stands now.
What probably happened was, after Elain123 translated the text, he got the same message that I often get when translating to/from Chinese/Japanese, telling me that "the number of characters does not match the original text." (it seems to make many people confused here at , and took me a while to figure out myself! )
Not knowing that he needed to click on the big orange-colored "Confirm", he instead edited his translation by putting the second half in the notes section under it, to make that automatic "Please Confirm!" problem stop jumping in his face every time he tried to submit his translation...
Why do I think this is what happened? Because I myself did exactly what he seems to have done, when I first started doing translations here at ! (And more than once, if I remember correctly!)...

CC: Francky5591

Thanks a lot for this note, Ian!
I did as you suggested, I hope it's fine now

That translation is very unprofessional!
And I agree with Francky's remarks!

Small corrections to the first paragraph:

...effective integration...
...information technology (instead of "communication skills" )...
...optimum performance...
...each of our customers...

The second paragraph should be:

In our opinion, the way to create added value includes the effective introduction of information technology, helping our customers increase their productivity, cut costs and increase their profits. We also understand the importance of effectively applying information technology to the creation of new business and management models, including lean production (LP) and paper-free offices, which increase our customers' competitive edge.

Sorry to bother you again pluiepoco...
Do you agree with my corrections above?
Thanks in advance!

CC: pluiepoco

最佳实践 = best practice

Thanks, pluiepoco!
I guess I can approve the translation with my corrections?
Anyway, 因为我没有自信我理解完美了, if you notice anything else, please let me know!

CC: pluiepoco

Original form of translation before edits:
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Optimized performance refers to the most effective combination of management philosophy, communication skills and customer needs. Through striving for optical performance we can help consecutive customers head towards success.
Our understanding of creating value is through effective communication, helping customers raise productivity, lowering costs and increasing benefits; another understanding is using effective communication to create new business and management models, such as intricate manufacturing, electronic services etc.
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@Elain123, I have edited your translation, but if there is anything in the new version that you don't agree with, please let me know: it is always possible to change it!

Thanks all
and a happy new year!