Asıl metin - Portekizce - se eu fosse um anjo descansaria aos pés

Nicoleta b, eşti sigură că sunt cuvintele "termos", "meigos" şi "sandalos"?Eu nu le-am găsit în dicţionarul meu... Celelalte cuvinte aş şti să le traduc.Mersi.

Freya,

I fixed (I think so ) the horrible typos in this text.

If you have any trouble with it, let me know, I'll help you!

CC: Freya

Thanks Goncin! I know I can rely on you !
In fact, I do have something to ask you.
The last sentence "Ouviria atentamente os teus lábios soltarem un belo sorriso." has something wrong in it: "I would listen atentively to your lips freeing(letting go/revealing) a beautiful smile"?? How can we listen to lips - we actually listen to sounds, the lips just intermediate. Could this verb be replaced with one of these ones: "see/admire/watch lips ..." ?
I've got to say it's a difficult text but I managed to translate the rest of it.
Thank you for your help.

Freya,

Yes, it's difficult to figure that one could listen to someone else to deliver (I like this verb - to deliver) a smile, but in poetry all is possible, isn't it? As Romanian shares a Latin basis with Portuguese, what if you keep the same sense?

CC: Freya

Yes, I'll try to keep the same sense. It's a very beautiful poem and in Romanian it sounds at least as beautiful as in Portuguese