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Originaltext - Portugiesisch - se eu fosse um anjo descansaria aos pés

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se eu fosse um anjo descansaria aos pés
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se eu fosse um anjo descansaria aos pés
do teu leito sagrado
e quando tu adormecesses somente
eu colocaria no teu rosto sorrisos ternos e meigos, voaria a teu lado perfumando com sândalo o teu caminho, segredava ao teu ouvido ternas canções
ouviria atentamente os teus lábios soltarem um belo sorriso.
Zuletzt bearbeitet von goncin - 24 Oktober 2007 08:55





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24 Oktober 2007 06:42

Freya
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Nicoleta b, eşti sigură că sunt cuvintele "termos", "meigos" şi "sandalos"?Eu nu le-am găsit în dicţionarul meu... Celelalte cuvinte aş şti să le traduc.Mersi.

24 Oktober 2007 08:57

goncin
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Freya,

I fixed (I think so ) the horrible typos in this text.

If you have any trouble with it, let me know, I'll help you!

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24 Oktober 2007 16:29

Freya
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Thanks Goncin! I know I can rely on you !
In fact, I do have something to ask you.
The last sentence "Ouviria atentamente os teus lábios soltarem un belo sorriso." has something wrong in it: "I would listen atentively to your lips freeing(letting go/revealing) a beautiful smile"?? How can we listen to lips - we actually listen to sounds, the lips just intermediate. Could this verb be replaced with one of these ones: "see/admire/watch lips ..." ?
I've got to say it's a difficult text but I managed to translate the rest of it.
Thank you for your help.

24 Oktober 2007 16:35

goncin
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Freya,

Yes, it's difficult to figure that one could listen to someone else to deliver (I like this verb - to deliver) a smile, but in poetry all is possible, isn't it? As Romanian shares a Latin basis with Portuguese, what if you keep the same sense?

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24 Oktober 2007 16:41

Freya
Anzahl der Beiträge: 1910
Yes, I'll try to keep the same sense. It's a very beautiful poem and in Romanian it sounds at least as beautiful as in Portuguese