I created a personal profile on Netlog and I added my own pictures, videos, blogs and events. I'd like to add you as a friend so that you can have a look at them. But first, you need to register on Netlog. Then, you can create your own profile.
Thank you,
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I visited Netlog and used the same "lexical terms"/jargon used there to keep a kind of consistency.(profile, blog, events, register)
Dernière édition ou validation par Tantine - 15 Octobre 2008 12:36
I set up my own profile on Netlog with pictures, video files, codes and special events me and I want to add you as a friend to be able to see. You first registration Netlog! Upon registration, can be created your profile.
okay its cool but maybe the first word Hi should be on a stand alone line for consistency, and then there is Thank you with a line space before it
rest of it is precise, oh this is not jargon thats the internet "street" language