Translation - Danish-English - Forhandling af produkter

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Title	Forhandling af produkter
Text Submitted by Vagtholm	Source language: Danish Tak for Deres hurtige tilbagemelding. Vi vil komme tilbage til Dem med et oplÃ¦g indenfor de nÃ¦ste 14 dage pÃ¥, hvordan vi ser mulighederne for, at man bedst muligt kan sÃ¦lge Deres produkter pÃ¥ det danske marked. Allerede nu barsler vi med en anderledes og spÃ¦ndende indgangsvinkel til at Ã¸ge kendskabet til Jeres produkter her i landet. Vi glÃ¦der os til at komme i dialog med Dem vedr. dette. Med venlig hilsen
Remarks about the translation	Teksten skal sendes til USA.

Title

products negotiation

Translation

English

Translated by

pias

Target language: English

Thanks for your fast response.

We will get back to you with a proposal within the next 14 days, about what possibilities there are to introduce your products on the Danish market.

We are already hatching a different and exciting approach now to increase the awareness of your products in this country.

We will look forward to corresponding with you about this.

Best regards

Last validated or edited by kafetzou - 28 October 2007 15:04

Latest messages

	Author	Message
		27 October 2007 19:39
	kafetzou Number of messages: 7963	I have made quite a few edits here, and I have one question for you: Do you really mean "feedback" (an opinion expressed about something) or should it be "response"?
		27 October 2007 20:24
	pias Number of messages: 8113	Thank you for correcting...I know, sometimes my way of writing english is clumsy. I'm working on that I checked the word feedback and when translating the danish word 'tilbagemelding' it says either feedback or reaction. Does that sounds strange?
		27 October 2007 23:57
	kafetzou Number of messages: 7963	Well ... it depends - as I said above, giving feedback means giving an opinion, not just a response to someone's inquiry. So if the correspondent had said something like "I really like your website", that would be feedback, but if he had said something like "We are interested in your company," that would be a response, because there is no opinion expressed.
		28 October 2007 04:29
	pias Number of messages: 8113	ok, I really dont know what the rest of the text is saying, this part that should be translated is saying nothing about it, but my guess is that the reciever had produced some sort of proposal... Maybe, It is best to be more like neutral, and write to your sugest: respons. Should I correct that?
		28 October 2007 10:02
	Anita_Luciano Number of messages: 1670	About the response-feedback discussion: it really should be "response" and not feedback in this context. Some other comments: (1) In the Danish text, it doesnÂ´t say "we will get back to you AGAIN", just "we will get back to you". (2) "OplÃ¦g" = "proposal" and not "further information". (3) The sentence that starts "Allerede nu barsler vi med en anderledes og spÃ¦ndende indgangsvinkel" actually says "Already now we are giving birth to a different and exciting approach" --> Barsle = give birth to (figuratively) and indgangsvinkel = approach.
		28 October 2007 09:34
	pias Number of messages: 8113	Thank you Anita_Luciano for your feedback! I think you know what you are talking about, so I will make thoose corrections. I hope that is ok. Kafetzou...?? I'll try and see what you think.
		28 October 2007 14:52
	kafetzou Number of messages: 7963	A agree with all of these corrections except for the "giving birth to" one. Even though everyone will understand it, it sounds awkward in English. I actually like your original idea of "hatching" better, so I will change it back. Also, we don't begin sentences with "already now" in English, so I will change the word order. Is this OK with you two now?
		28 October 2007 14:54
	pias Number of messages: 8113	Absolute
		28 October 2007 15:03
	Anita_Luciano Number of messages: 1670	yes, it sounds much better now! I liked the verb "hatching" in this context.