Translation - English-Portaingéilis (na Brasaíle) - love-amor

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Category Poetry - Love / Friendship

Title	love-amor
Text Submitted by laryssa campos	Source language: English Razzle dazzle snow scene, my life so white so bare so vast, and then your open door, my heart whooshing toward your arms, racing much too fast, too free, as your eyes waltzed slowly over me, the cadence yours, the tempo mine, the music poured like vintage wine, the magic of our moment so rare, so good, so new, as breathlessly, I gazed at you.
Remarks about the translation	From "Love"-poems by Danielle Steel

Title	Love-amor
Translation Portaingéilis (na Brasaíle) Translated by lilian canale	Target language: Portaingéilis (na Brasaíle) AlvoroÃ§o cena de neve, minha vida tÃ£o branca tÃ£o exposta, tÃ£o vasta. e entÃ£o, a sua porta aberta meu coraÃ§Ã£o correndo atÃ© ela. seus braÃ§os apressados demais livres demais como seus olhos danÃ§aram sobre mim, lentamente a cadÃªncia, sua o ritmo, meu a mÃºsica fluiu como vinho fino a magia de nosso momento tÃ£o rara tÃ£o boa, tÃ£o nova. como sem respiraÃ§Ã£o contemplei vocÃª.
Remarks about the translation	I believe there is a misspelled word in the original text: watzed for gazed Tantine's suggestion: waltzed

Validated by casper tavernello - 26 February 2008 18:19

Last messages

	Author	Message
		25 February 2008 19:31
	casper tavernello Number of messages: 5057	"Wooshing" Ã© onomatopÃ©ico para o som de "woosh".
		25 February 2008 19:42
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	whoosh = woosh = rush These are interchangeable, but I've never heard "watzed". Have you?
		25 February 2008 19:50
	casper tavernello Number of messages: 5057	Yep. But you said it was misspelled. I have no idea about what "watzed" means. -Miss Stefani watzed in like a catwalk model. -I watzed a Winnie-da-Pooh movie, but it was too wong. one "misspelled" waltzed. CC: dramati IanMegill2 Tantine kafetzou
		25 February 2008 20:05
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	Any better, now?
		25 February 2008 20:59
	Tantine Number of messages: 2747	Oi Casper Oi Lilly Yep, "watzed" is misspelled, I take it is should read "waltzed" as in "Waltzing Matilda" (Australian national anthem ) Waltzed as in Vienna, Strauss (not Levi jeans) Hope this helps Beijos Tantine
		25 February 2008 21:02
	casper tavernello Number of messages: 5057	Strauss rocks...I mean, waltzes. "Better" enough, Liloca? Thanks Ruth.
		26 February 2008 01:22
	IanMegill2 Number of messages: 1671	Hi Casper, It was waltzed. I fixed it. By the way, did you know that your example "waltzed in" actually doesn't mean "danced in"? It means "walked in very confidently, without caring very much about her surroundings or other people's feelings" You probably know that already, but I just thought you might be interested if you didn't! And your "watzing Winnie-da-Pooh" example was SO funny!!! ;; I'll give you English Native Speaker Qualifications for that!!!;;
		26 February 2008 01:46
	casper tavernello Number of messages: 5057	Oh Ian, that was a Google search. No credits for that. hahaha
		26 February 2008 01:52
	IanMegill2 Number of messages: 1671	Oh! You fooled me! Anyway, it was still really funny! But no Native Speaker License for you after all! Just a Master Googler License!
		26 February 2008 01:53
	casper tavernello Number of messages: 5057