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Translation - German-English - Wir sind damit sehr einverstanden und freuen uns...

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Wir sind damit sehr einverstanden und freuen uns...
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Submitted by sewet
Source language: German

Wir sind damit sehr einverstanden und freuen uns schon auf die Treffen, die Ausflüge und die Zeit bei Dir in Chico. Du kannst für uns Doppelzimmer bestellen, die wir selber bezahlen. Du musst für uns nichts besonderes buchen. Reserviere das, was Du für Dich sonst auch buchen würdest.
In Gedanken packen wir schon die Koffer. Welche Kleidung ist zweckmäßig? Haben wir noch etwas zu beachten? Können wir noch etwas besonderes mitbringen? Habt Ihr einen speziellen Wunsch? Was können wir für Euch tun?
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We agree very much to it and we are already really looking forward to ...
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Translated by Minny
Target language: English

We agree very much to it and we are already really looking forward to the social gatherings, the excursions and the time with you in Chico. You could reserve a double-room for us for which we will pay ourselves. You do not have to reserve something special for us, just what you would reserve for yourself.

In our minds we are already packing our suitcases. What kind of clothes would be suitable?
Is there still something we should see about? Is there something special we can bring with us? Do you have a special desire? What can we do for you?

Validated by lilian canale - 17 January 2009 13:04





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16 January 2009 15:24

lilian canale
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Hi Minny,

This looks very good. I'd just suggest a few correction in style in order to sound better in English.


we are already looking very much forward ---> we are really looking forward

what you would have reserved for yourself ---> what you would reserve for yourself

travelling bags ---> suitcases (however that is not necessary since "packing" include the suitcases)

pay attention to ---> see about/after

Tell me what you think.

16 January 2009 15:50

Minny
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Hi Lilian Canale,
1st line: OK but somehow "already" =(schon)should be mentioned.
I used the words "travelling bags" because I was afraid that "suitcases" were too british but I do not really know - so I leave it to you.
Otherwise I agree with you.
Thanks a lot!

16 January 2009 15:59

lilian canale
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OK Minny, you can keep that 'already' there, no problem.

" we are already really looking forward to the social gatherings" is fine.
I insist on 'suitcases', it's used in every English.

If you make the edits we can set a poll, since my German is almost 0.

16 January 2009 16:22

Minny
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Done.
Bye- bye for now.

16 January 2009 19:32

Grimoire
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A comma between "for us" and "just what you" would make sense, I think

16 January 2009 23:34

gbernsdorff
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I agree with Grimoire about the comma.
*welche* Kleidung = *what* kind of clothes
[*that* translates *diese* or *jene*]

16 January 2009 23:38

gbernsdorff
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*that kind* should be *what kind*

17 January 2009 07:28

merdogan
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Would you please reserve a double-room....> You would reserve a double-room....