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Original text - French - Contrôle ta passionCurrent status Original text
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| | Text to be translated Submitted by tytan | Source language: French
Contrôle ta passion | Remarks about the translation | devise pour un club sportif <edit> "contrôles" with "contrôle", as this verb conjugated at the imperative mode reads without an "s" at its end -</edit>(06/07/francky) |
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ตอบล่าสุด | | | | | 7 June 2010 11:32 | | | | | | 7 June 2010 11:39 | | | Bonjour
Je n'ai pas trouvé la traduction
La devise à traduire en latin est:
" Contrôle ta passion ! "
Merci | | | 7 June 2010 13:25 | | | Je pense que ce doit être quelque chose comme "studium tuum modera!", mais je ne suis pas expert en latin. J'ai néanmoins vérifié avec un dictionnaire, et j'ai tenu compte des déclinaisons à employer (accusatif pour "ta passion) ainsi que du mode verbal (impératif) ainsi que de la syntaxe latine (COD avant le verbe).
Je vais cependant fournir une traduction-relais en anglais à nos experts en latin, de façon à ce qu'ils confirment (ou infirment) ma traduction.
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Hi dear experts in Latin, this text in French means "Master your passion!", is the translation I posted (above in bold itallic) right?
Thanks a lot! CC: Efylove Aneta B. | | | 7 June 2010 14:57 | | | Hello Francky!
Almost right, dear, almost.
Imperative from "moderari" is "moderare" (not "modera", because it is so-called "verbum deponens"
The rest is fine, but I'm wondering what "passion" expresses here.
"studium" means: passion (like hobby, mainly "love to learning" , fondness, enthusiasm...
It has got rather a positive meaning.
Since I have to control the passion, in my opinion the feeling has got rather a negative meaning. So I myself would use here a word "cupiditas" or even "libido" | | | 7 June 2010 21:59 | | | | | | 7 June 2010 23:33 | | | Wow! The context was really needed here.
I don't know if "moderari" is a proper verb here.
Maybe:
"Percipe studium tuum"?
I'm still not sure what do you mean by "master" here. We can master the language or some knowledge, but passion? | | | 8 June 2010 10:25 | | | | | | 8 June 2010 15:20 | | | | | | 8 June 2010 22:29 | | | Great Francky! Thank you for the fruitful cooperation.
Do you think I can make the translation official now? | | | 8 June 2010 23:05 | | | |
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