Translation - English-Arabic - Each small candle

May I suggest a better Arabic translation? I can't submit it using the "translate" button.

Here goes ..

لا المُعَذِّبُ باللذِي يُخِيفُنِي
وَلا السُّقُوطُ الأَخِيْرُ لِلجَسَدِ
وَلا مَواسِيرُ بَنَادِقِ المَوْتِ
وَلا الظِلالُ عَلَى الجُدْرَانِ
وَلا اللَّيلُ إذْ نَحْوَ الأَرْضِ
يَنْدَفِعُ آخِرُ نُجُومِ الأَلَمِ الخَافِتَةِ

بَل اللامُبالاةُ العَمياءُ
لِلعالَمِ القاسِي بِلا شُعُورٍ

كُلُّ شَمْعَةٍ صَغِيرَةٍ
تُضيءُ زاويَةً فِي الظَّلامِ

hasen,
This translation was accepted by an expert what means that it was considered correct.

I didn't say it's wrong, it's okay, but I think it's a bit weak, that's all

Well, since this translation is from July/2007, I guess the requester must have used it already.
Anyway he will receive your message.

Any way the translation made by the hassen is more appropriate.