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Dịch - French-English - Arrivé au bord du gouffre, là ou tu as peur de...

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Arrivé au bord du gouffre, là ou tu as peur de...
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Submitted by fabinouuuuuu
Source language: French

Arrivé au bord du gouffre, là où tu as peur de tomber, la coupe est pleine et je suis la goutte, celle de trop, qui déborde et s 'échoue. Dans l'indifférence générale, sur le sol je m'évapore, je monte au ciel, emprisonné par les nuages, une prison blanche où l'on m'oublie. Je suis un homme, je suis cette goutte, oubliée de tous, écartée, piétinée, emprisonnée. Je tombe de haut, je ne me relève pas. Je suis cet être délaissé par une société qui, elle, m'a oublié. Écarté par mon étrangeté, mon seul tort serait peut-être de me différencier.
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bonjours ou bonsoir ^^. je fais de la musique à mes heures perdues et j'ai gribouillé quelques lignes qui je trouve me reflètent bien. je souhaiterais traduire cette "chanson" en anglais britannique pour que je puisse la chanter sans avoir l'air trop nul :). je vous remercie d'avance.

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Once on the verge of ruin
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Translated by Francky5591
Target language: English

Once on the verge of ruin, there, where you fear to fall, the cup is full and I'm the drop, the extra one, that brims over and runs aground. In a general unconcern, on the ground I evaporate, I go up to the sky, emprisonned by clouds, a white jail where I'm forgotten. I'm a man, I'm this drop, shunned by all, put to one side, stepped on, confined. I fall from high, I don't rise up again. I'm this creature neglected by a society that has forgotten me. Scattered because of my strangeness, perhaps my only fault would be to differenciate.
Remarks about the translation
..a white jail where I'm forgotten. I'm a man, I'm this drop, shunned by all forgotten, put to one side, stepped on, confined.")?
Validated by Francky5591 - 17 Tháng 2 2011 01:30





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28 Tháng 1 2011 14:36

Francky5591
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Hi Lilian! I'm not sure whether it would be better to use "scattered because of my weirdness" than "scattered by my weirdness", as the guy's weirdness is the reason why he's scattered by the others. (or do we say "scattered from the others" What is your opinion?

Thanks!

CC: lilian canale

28 Tháng 1 2011 15:16

lilian canale
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Hummm...this is not an easy text.
Let's see...to begin with I think you could use "strangeness" instead of "weirdness".
From what I understood is that he's saying that he feels to be different, but not necessarily "weird".
And "because of my..." would be better.

28 Tháng 1 2011 16:35

Francky5591
Tổng số bài gửi: 12396
I've followed your advices, thanks Lilian!

30 Tháng 1 2011 12:48

fabinouuuuuu
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merci beaucoup c'est super