İşte sonunda buldum. Neyi mi? Sana gönderebileceğim dostluğumuzun, yeni yılda da devam edeceğini anlatabilecek sıcacık bir yeni yıl mesajını; Mutlu yıllar.
Yeni bir yılda yüzünden gülücükler, gönlünden sevgiler eksik olmasın mutlu yıllar.
Şeker gibi tatlı, masal gibi güzel bir yıl diliyorum..
And I finally found it! Guess what? A warm, new year's message, to send to you, that can tell about our friendship which will continue also this year. Happy New Year!
May the smile on your face and the love in your heart never fade away. Happy New Year!
I wish you a new year sweet like a candy, beautiful like a fairy tale.
Can I have your address? I would like to send you a cyber new year's gift
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sanel yazdığın şeyi sanal oalrak düşünerek çevirdim. Umarım doğrudur. O yuzden Can I have your address? kısmında yalnızca address yerine "e-mail address" olarak da yazabilirsin.
За последен път се одобри от lilian canale - 9 Януари 2009 17:24
Hi cheesecake,
There are some things to check.
For example:
And finally I found ---> And I finally found it
"A warm, new-year message that can tell our friendship, which I send you, will last also this year."
"A warm, new year's message to send you, that can (.....) and (...)"
can tell our friendship? What does it mean? show/portray/symbolize our friendship? or simply "tell about it"?
will last also this year?
will be valid for the whole year? will be meaningful for all the year long?
cheesecake, this time I'll show you the ropes enhancing the corrections from the beginning, but as you see when there are too many edits to do, the evaluation takes too long (as I explained to you before).
And I finally found it! Guess what? A warm, new year's message, to send to you, that can tell about our friendship which will continue also this year. Happy New Year!
May the smile on your face and the love in your heart never fade away. Happy New Year!
I wish you a new year sweet like a candy, beautiful like a fairy tale.
Can I have your address? I would like to send you a cyber new year's gift