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Переклад - Хорватська-Англійська - BROD OD PAPIRAПоточний статус Переклад
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KAZU, PUSTAS BRODOVE RIJEKOM PAPIRNE, NA SVAKOM PISE "CEKAM A NEMA TE".
BEZ TEBE NE SMIJEM JA NE UMIJEM DISATI, SMIJATI SE, VOLJETI.
KAZU DA PUSTAS ZMAJEVE NEBOM NAJVISE, NA SVAKOM PISE ZASTO NEMA TE.
KADA ODES ONDA UCINI TO DA TAKO NE IZGLEDA, KADA ODES OD MENE ONDA UCINI "SAMO TO". | Пояснення стосовно перекладу | |
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Переклад зроблено  feroz | Мова, якою перекладати: Англійська
You let paper boats down the river, they say.
"Waiting for you and you are not there" is written on each.
I can't go on without you, I can't breathe, I can't laugh, I can't love.
You let kites fly high, they say.
"Why aren't you here?" are the words on each.
When you leave me don't make me realize that, when you leave me do it that way.
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1 Вересня 2008 21:37 | | | Hi feroz (Wow! your nick means "fierce" in Spanish)
I'm puzzled by the end of some sentences: "said each"
Before those "can't" we need a subject in English
"Why You are not here?" that should read: "Why aren't you here?"
And I think "...when you leave me do only that"
would be better if : "when you leave me just do it"
What do you think? | | |
2 Вересня 2008 07:20 | |
ferozКількість повідомлень: 7 | 1. "Said each" means every paper boat, every kite
2. "Why aren't you here?" - I agree with you
3. "Do only that" in contexts of the poem means leave me in such way that I still be thinking you are here while " just do it" says just leave me.
Btw, FEROZ is name of my blackberry wine. I pick up the word from Spanish dictionary under word "sangre"(blood) and means something like "thirsty of blood".
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3 Вересня 2008 01:36 | | | OK feroz, let me see if I got it.
"You let paper boats down the river, they say.
"Waiting for you and you are not there" each replied.
I can't go on without you, I can't breathe, I can't laugh, I can't love.
You let kites fly high, they say.
"Why aren't you here? each said.
When you leave me don't make me realize that, when you leave me do it that way."
Does this convey the meaning?
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2 Вересня 2008 14:51 | |
ferozКількість повідомлень: 7 | Yes Lilian, you make it right.
Now the translation looks accurate.
Thank you. | | |
2 Вересня 2008 23:35 | | | Text should be "is written on each of them" instead of "each replied" or "each said". Also, "breathe" instead of "breath" | | |
3 Вересня 2008 01:42 | | | Oh...so those are messages written on the paper boats or kites.
Hum...that changes things a little.
Do you agree feroz? | | |
3 Вересня 2008 07:18 | |
ferozКількість повідомлень: 7 | "is written on each of them" is literally translation, but I think "each replied" and "each said" is shorter and sounds better in the poem and meaning is the same.
"breathe" or "breath" - I checked in dictionary, both is correct. | | |
3 Вересня 2008 10:40 | | | thank you for translation,it's ok...bye bye  .. | | |
4 Вересня 2008 14:07 | | | Hi feroz,
The problem is that the meaning changes. We can choose shorter forms for a sentence if it reflects exactly what the original means, however in this case I think that it would not be clear that the sentence is "written" on a paper boat if we don't say so.
For the words "breath" (noun) or "breathe" (verb), both exist, but in this case we need the verb. | | |
3 Вересня 2008 13:01 | |
ferozКількість повідомлень: 7 | I agree, specially because request was for meaning. |
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