翻訳 - クロアチア語-英語 - BROD OD PAPIRA

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カテゴリ歌 - 愛 / 友情

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タイトル	BROD OD PAPIRA
テキスト zvjerka様が投稿しました	原稿の言語: クロアチア語 KAZU, PUSTAS BRODOVE RIJEKOM PAPIRNE, NA SVAKOM PISE "CEKAM A NEMA TE". BEZ TEBE NE SMIJEM JA NE UMIJEM DISATI, SMIJATI SE, VOLJETI. KAZU DA PUSTAS ZMAJEVE NEBOM NAJVISE, NA SVAKOM PISE ZASTO NEMA TE. KADA ODES ONDA UCINI TO DA TAKO NE IZGLEDA, KADA ODES OD MENE ONDA UCINI "SAMO TO".
翻訳についてのコメント	ENGLESKI US

タイトル	Paper Boat
翻訳英語 feroz様が翻訳しました	翻訳の言語: 英語 You let paper boats down the river, they say. "Waiting for you and you are not there" is written on each. I can't go on without you, I can't breathe, I can't laugh, I can't love. You let kites fly high, they say. "Why aren't you here?" are the words on each. When you leave me don't make me realize that, when you leave me do it that way.

最終承認・編集者 lilian canale

- 2008年 9月 4日 14:08

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	投稿者	投稿１
		2008年 9月 1日 21:37
	lilian canale 投稿数: 14972	Hi feroz (Wow! your nick means "fierce" in Spanish) I'm puzzled by the end of some sentences: "said each" Before those "can't" we need a subject in English "Why You are not here?" that should read: "Why aren't you here?" And I think "...when you leave me do only that" would be better if : "when you leave me just do it" What do you think?
		2008年 9月 2日 07:20
	feroz 投稿数: 7	1. "Said each" means every paper boat, every kite 2. "Why aren't you here?" - I agree with you 3. "Do only that" in contexts of the poem means leave me in such way that I still be thinking you are here while " just do it" says just leave me. Btw, FEROZ is name of my blackberry wine. I pick up the word from Spanish dictionary under word "sangre"(blood) and means something like "thirsty of blood".
		2008年 9月 3日 01:36
	lilian canale 投稿数: 14972	OK feroz, let me see if I got it. "You let paper boats down the river, they say. "Waiting for you and you are not there" each replied. I can't go on without you, I can't breathe, I can't laugh, I can't love. You let kites fly high, they say. "Why aren't you here? each said. When you leave me don't make me realize that, when you leave me do it that way." Does this convey the meaning?
		2008年 9月 2日 14:51
	feroz 投稿数: 7	Yes Lilian, you make it right. Now the translation looks accurate. Thank you.
		2008年 9月 2日 23:35
	BORIME4KA 投稿数: 30	Text should be "is written on each of them" instead of "each replied" or "each said". Also, "breathe" instead of "breath"
		2008年 9月 3日 01:42
	lilian canale 投稿数: 14972	Oh...so those are messages written on the paper boats or kites. Hum...that changes things a little. Do you agree feroz?
		2008年 9月 3日 07:18
	feroz 投稿数: 7	"is written on each of them" is literally translation, but I think "each replied" and "each said" is shorter and sounds better in the poem and meaning is the same. "breathe" or "breath" - I checked in dictionary, both is correct.
		2008年 9月 3日 10:40
	zvjerka 投稿数: 1	thank you for translation,it's ok...bye bye..
		2008年 9月 4日 14:07
	lilian canale 投稿数: 14972	Hi feroz, The problem is that the meaning changes. We can choose shorter forms for a sentence if it reflects exactly what the original means, however in this case I think that it would not be clear that the sentence is "written" on a paper boat if we don't say so. For the words "breath" (noun) or "breathe" (verb), both exist, but in this case we need the verb.
		2008年 9月 3日 13:01
	feroz 投稿数: 7	I agree, specially because request was for meaning.