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Can you give me an english bridge in order to help with the evaluation?

Thank you very much...

CC: ahikamr ittaihen milkman

Hi thathavieira, this one is a difficult one, since it's written in a very poetic language. I'll give a try in a free translation for you:

<bridge>

A night of roses

A night of roses
we shall go out to the garden
myrrh, perfumes, and incense
a sill to your feet

A dove coos at dawn
Your head is full of dew
your mouth is like a rose to the morning
I will pick it for myself

Night is slowly falling
and a rose's wind is blowing
I will slowly whisper a song to you
A melody of love

</bridge>

Still missing the last part.

Erev shel shoshanim Neytsena
o Laila yored yored le'at
veruach shoshan noshva
hava elchash lach shir balat
zemer shel ahava

Vamos sair na noite de rosas,
A noite cai lentamente,
Soprando uma brisa de rosas,
Deixa-me sussurrar uma canção para ti,
Uma canção de amor.

We shall go out in te rose's night
Night is slowly falling
and a rose's wind is blowing
I will slowly whisper a song to you
A melody of love



Just one thing: garden or city?

Lucila - you're right. I forgot the last one.
Thanks.

habustan = the garden

Então Lucila, você já pode editar a sua tradução de acordo com as considerações do homem do leite.