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翻译 - 土耳其语-英语 - Seni yıldızlara benzetiyorum. Onlar kadar pırıl...当前状态 翻译
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讨论区 聊天室 - 爱 / 友谊 | Seni yıldızlara benzetiyorum. Onlar kadar pırıl... | | 源语言: 土耳其语
Seni yıldızlara benzetiyorum. Onlar kadar pırıl pırıl ve yine onlar kadar ışıl ışılsın. Ama aranızda tek bir fark var, Onlar bin tane sen bir tanesin. |
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| I liken you to stars. You are as glistening... | | 目的语言: 英语
You are like the stars. You glisten and sparkle just like them. There is just one difference between you and them; they are a thousand, you are unique. |
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由 Lein认可或编辑 - 2011年 十一月 3日 19:19
最近发帖 | | | | | 2011年 十月 31日 19:16 | | | hi rollingmaster
I have made a few edits; let me know if you don't agree.
Here is your original translation:
I liken you to stars. You are as glistening as them and also as sparkling as them. Yet, there is an only difference between you and them; they are a thousand, you are the one. | | | 2011年 十月 31日 19:46 | | | Would you mind if learnt what is wrong with 'I liken you to stars'? | | | 2011年 十月 31日 20:00 | | | No problem! It is just that it sounds more biblical than anything else. I find it difficult to take it seriously when I see the sentence and I don't think the idea here was to make it so melodramatic that it becomes a joke. Another possibility would be 'I compare you to the stars', if you prefer. | | | 2011年 十月 31日 20:28 | | | I think 'you are like the stars' is better. | | | 2011年 十一月 1日 12:31 | | | Sorry, Lein! I think you were faster than me again. I´ve read rollingmaster´s original translation, you see? (For example: "I like you to stars." = "You´re like the stars."
Bye!
Vesna J. | | | 2011年 十一月 1日 12:33 | | | OK! Thanks | | | 2011年 十一月 2日 17:25 | | | Hi guys
I think the translation is fine. But I suggest saying:
"they are a thousand, (but) you are unique"
If it gives exactly the same meaning, it is OK | | | 2011年 十一月 2日 17:39 | | | I like your suggestion! I think it sounds more beautiful. ('you are the one = you are the one for me; you are unique = you are a very special person, not only to me, you just are)
Rollingmaster, are you happy for me to change it? | | | 2011年 十一月 2日 20:29 | | | You don't need to even ask, Lein | | | 2011年 十一月 3日 19:19 | | | |
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