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翻译 - 土耳其语-英语 - Uzun süre bilgisayar başında kalarak sosyalleÅŸme...当前状态 翻译
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| Uzun süre bilgisayar başında kalarak sosyalleÅŸme... | | 源语言: 土耳其语
Uzun süre bilgisayar başında kalarak sosyalleşme yönünde sorunlar yaşar.
Kumar oyunlarına meyilli olabilir, buradaki oyunları oynamayı alışkanlık haline getirebilir.
Uzun süre bilgisayar başında kaldığı için bedeni hareketsiz kalır, fiziksel sağlık sorunları yaşayabilir.
İnternetten ulaşılabilen oyunlar nedeniyle aşırı şiddetle karşılaşıp şiddete karşı duyarsızlaşabilir ve öğrendiklerini uygulayabilir.
| | <edit> before edit : "Uzun süre bilgisayar başında kalarak sosyalleşme yönünde sorun yaşar.
Kumar oyunlarına meyilli olabilir Buradaki oyunları oynayarak alışkanlık haline getirebilir
Uzun süre bilgisayar başında kalarak beden hareketsiz kalır Fizksel sağlık sorunları yaşayabilir.
İnternetten ulaşılabilen oyunlar nedeniyle aşırı şiddetle karşılaşıp şiddete karşı duyarsızlaşabilir ve öğrendiklerini uygulayabilir"</edit> (Thanks to Mesud2991 who provided us with a proper Turkish version) |
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| Negative effects of the computer on children | | 目的语言: 英语
They may have some problems with their social skills by wasting lots of time on the computer.
They may get interested in gambling games and get into the habit of playing this kind of games.
Their bodies remain still by sitting behind the computer for a long time; as a result of this, they are likely to get physical health problems.
Because games in which violence is used are readily accessible through the internet, they may come across these and get senseless towards violence and put what they have learnt from these into practice. |
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由 Lein认可或编辑 - 2012年 四月 11日 13:03
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2012年 四月 4日 20:38 | | | Hi Mesud 
A couple of questions:
- what do you mean by 'they may intent to banking game'?
- what do you mean by 'face them'? | | |
2012年 四月 4日 21:28 | | | Hi Lein,
- They may inherit a tendency to banking game
- They may come across them | | |
2012年 四月 5日 10:51 | | | Do you mean a gambling game?
I still don't understand 'intent' or 'inherit a tendency' - maybe 'develop an addiction'?
come across  | | |
2012年 四月 5日 12:03 | | | Let's say "be interested in gambling games". | | |
2012年 四月 5日 17:22 | | | Dear Mesut,
Why did you use "they"?
It is "he" or "she".
"be interested in gambling games"...> "..in to the habit in the gambling games" | | |
2012年 四月 5日 17:29 | | | - This text is about children and 'they' includes both 'boys' and 'girls'
- This is meaningless. Something like 'they may love the habit in the gabling games. --> If you are into something, it means you really like it. | | |
2012年 四月 5日 22:20 | | | Hi Lein,
Could 3rd line be as follows:
Their bodies remain motionless by staying on computer for a long while; as a result of which, they are likely to get physical health problems.
I'm not sure whether 'stay' fits here. If not, consider it 'play' | | |
2012年 四月 5日 22:51 | | | Are you sure for "about children" because Türkish text is not plural ? It is about only one child. (or a person)
and do you know the meaning of " in to the habit" ? | | |
2012年 四月 5日 22:59 | | | What does it mean? Could you please write the whole sentence? | | |
2012年 四月 8日 22:51 | | | I agree with Mesud about the 3rd sentence.
I agree with merdogan, the text is not plural and it is not clear if it is about a child(-ren), perhaps it'd be better to use 'a person'. | | |
2012年 四月 8日 23:00 | | | Hi everbody
I searched the original, it's about children. And 'they' refers to 'children'. I didn't want to say 'a child may..., a child may...'. | | |
2012年 四月 10日 11:17 | | | Regarding plural or singular, I think it sounds more natural to write the English as plural. If it is in singular in Turkish, it is clearly meant as a generalised text, applying to all people / children, not just to one in particular.
As for children or adults, Mesud, could you post the link please so someone can confirm this is about children, not people in general?
(Not that I don't trust you! But the recommended thing to do on cucumis is to get at least one other person to confirm.)
Thanks! | | |
2012年 四月 10日 11:23 | | | OK Lein,
Here is the source: http://sizdeduyun.com/yazdir.asp?ID=497 | | |
2012年 四月 11日 12:42 | | | Hi Lein
Lastly (I promise), I would like to say 'they may be prone to gambling games' for the second sentence, which I think would sound better considering the Turkish.
Sorry to trouble you. | | |
2012年 四月 11日 12:46 | | | That would sound very unusual in English. If someone is prone to playing gambling games, he is likely to play these; this still sounds strange. Do you mean 'drawn to gambling games'? (attracted to them)? | | |
2012年 四月 11日 12:53 | | | No. It should be 'be prone to'. Anyway, let's leave this as it is. |
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