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Texte Proposé par onur55	Langue de départ: Turc Uzun sÃ¼re bilgisayar baÅŸÄ±nda kalarak sosyalleÅŸme yÃ¶nÃ¼nde sorunlar yaÅŸar. Kumar oyunlarÄ±na meyilli olabilir, buradaki oyunlarÄ± oynamayÄ± alÄ±ÅŸkanlÄ±k haline getirebilir. Uzun sÃ¼re bilgisayar baÅŸÄ±nda kaldÄ±ÄŸÄ± iÃ§in bedeni hareketsiz kalÄ±r, fiziksel saÄŸlÄ±k sorunlarÄ± yaÅŸayabilir. Ä°nternetten ulaÅŸÄ±labilen oyunlar nedeniyle aÅŸÄ±rÄ± ÅŸiddetle karÅŸÄ±laÅŸÄ±p ÅŸiddete karÅŸÄ± duyarsÄ±zlaÅŸabilir ve Ã¶ÄŸrendiklerini uygulayabilir.
Commentaires pour la traduction	<edit> before edit : "Uzun sÃ¼re bilgisayar baÅŸÄ±nda kalarak sosyalleÅŸme yÃ¶nÃ¼nde sorun yaÅŸar. Kumar oyunlarÄ±na meyilli olabilir Buradaki oyunlarÄ± oynayarak alÄ±ÅŸkanlÄ±k haline getirebilir Uzun sÃ¼re bilgisayar baÅŸÄ±nda kalarak beden hareketsiz kalÄ±r Fizksel saÄŸlÄ±k sorunlarÄ± yaÅŸayabilir. Ä°nternetten ulaÅŸÄ±labilen oyunlar nedeniyle aÅŸÄ±rÄ± ÅŸiddetle karÅŸÄ±laÅŸÄ±p ÅŸiddete karÅŸÄ± duyarsÄ±zlaÅŸabilir ve Ã¶ÄŸrendiklerini uygulayabilir"</edit> (Thanks to Mesud2991 who provided us with a proper Turkish version)

Titre

Negative effects of the computer on children

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Anglais

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Mesud2991

Langue d'arrivée: Anglais

They may have some problems with their social skills by wasting lots of time on the computer.

They may get interested in gambling games and get into the habit of playing this kind of games.

Their bodies remain still by sitting behind the computer for a long time; as a result of this, they are likely to get physical health problems.

Because games in which violence is used are readily accessible through the internet, they may come across these and get senseless towards violence and put what they have learnt from these into practice.

Dernière édition ou validation par Lein - 11 Avril 2012 13:03

Derniers messages

	Auteur	Message
		4 Avril 2012 20:38
	Lein Nombre de messages: 3389	Hi Mesud A couple of questions: - what do you mean by 'they may intent to banking game'? - what do you mean by 'face them'?
		4 Avril 2012 21:28
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	Hi Lein, - They may inherit a tendency to banking game - They may come across them
		5 Avril 2012 10:51
	Lein Nombre de messages: 3389	Do you mean a gambling game? I still don't understand 'intent' or 'inherit a tendency' - maybe 'develop an addiction'? come across
		5 Avril 2012 12:03
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	Let's say "be interested in gambling games".
		5 Avril 2012 17:22
	merdogan Nombre de messages: 3769	Dear Mesut, Why did you use "they"? It is "he" or "she". "be interested in gambling games"...> "..in to the habit in the gambling games"
		5 Avril 2012 17:29
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	- This text is about children and 'they' includes both 'boys' and 'girls' - This is meaningless. Something like 'they may love the habit in the gabling games. --> If you are into something, it means you really like it.
		5 Avril 2012 22:20
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	Hi Lein, Could 3rd line be as follows: Their bodies remain motionless by staying on computer for a long while; as a result of which, they are likely to get physical health problems. I'm not sure whether 'stay' fits here. If not, consider it 'play'
		5 Avril 2012 22:51
	merdogan Nombre de messages: 3769	Are you sure for "about children" because TÃ¼rkish text is not plural ? It is about only one child. (or a person) and do you know the meaning of " in to the habit" ?
		5 Avril 2012 22:59
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	What does it mean? Could you please write the whole sentence?
		8 Avril 2012 22:51
	FIGEN KIRCI Nombre de messages: 2543	I agree with Mesud about the 3rd sentence. I agree with merdogan, the text is not plural and it is not clear if it is about a child(-ren), perhaps it'd be better to use 'a person'.
		8 Avril 2012 23:00
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	Hi everbody I searched the original, it's about children. And 'they' refers to 'children'. I didn't want to say 'a child may..., a child may...'.
		10 Avril 2012 11:17
	Lein Nombre de messages: 3389	Regarding plural or singular, I think it sounds more natural to write the English as plural. If it is in singular in Turkish, it is clearly meant as a generalised text, applying to all people / children, not just to one in particular. As for children or adults, Mesud, could you post the link please so someone can confirm this is about children, not people in general? (Not that I don't trust you! But the recommended thing to do on cucumis is to get at least one other person to confirm.) Thanks!
		10 Avril 2012 11:23
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	OK Lein, Here is the source: http://sizdeduyun.com/yazdir.asp?ID=497
		11 Avril 2012 12:42
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	Hi Lein Lastly (I promise), I would like to say 'they may be prone to gambling games' for the second sentence, which I think would sound better considering the Turkish. Sorry to trouble you.
		11 Avril 2012 12:46
	Lein Nombre de messages: 3389	That would sound very unusual in English. If someone is prone to playing gambling games, he is likely to play these; this still sounds strange. Do you mean 'drawn to gambling games'? (attracted to them)?
		11 Avril 2012 12:53
	Mesud2991 Nombre de messages: 1331	No. It should be 'be prone to'. Anyway, let's leave this as it is.