翻译 - 希伯来语-英语 - מבצע

Hi dramati

This looks good, but ...

1) I'm not sure about the use of the word "rights" - could it be "offer"?

2) What does "a dream same" mean? Should it be "a dream sale"?

Hi

Yes. Typo on dream same should be sale.

Special Gold Rings
ONLY at "World of Gold"
Now, a dream same because of our new opening: 1/2 off on the price of the second ring purchased!

The Rings are created by the talented designer Yoav Levi.

The store is located in Haifa at the "Lev HaMfratz" shopping center.

Hours are from 9:00 AM until 7:00 PM: Sunday through Friday.

The store is also open Saturday Evenings after the Sabbath.

In order to take advantage of the sale you will be required to use a credit card.

I was working late, our time again, and used the darn spell checker in word it didn't catch it.

OK; thanks. A spell checker can only catch words that do not exist - it cannot known when you have used a word that exists, but in the wrong place.

That, in my opinion, is the difference between artificial intelligence and real intelligence!!

Not as correct as it should be, make it more official.

Hi Elinor,

Got any suggestions to make an add seem more official?