Creative Nail Design och Backscratchers ställer höga krav på sina lärare. För att behålla sin lärarlicens måste vi som är lärare klara de årliga uppdateringsproven. Detta garanterar att du som elev alltid blir utbildad av lärare med färsk och uppdaterad kunskap. Därför kan vi skryta med att våra utbildningar alltid håller högsta kvalitet.
Creative Nail Design and Backscratchers make high demands on their teachers. To keep the teaching license we must, as teachers, pass the annual updating tests. This guarantees that you, as a pupil, will always be educated by teachers whose knowledge is fresh and updated. Therefore, we can boast about our educations keeping always the highest quality.
Zuletzt bestätigt oder bearbeitet von lilian canale - 18 Juli 2008 01:59
There are a few mistakes in the syntax and some commas will be needed to help the readability.
"...must we as teachers pass the annual update tests." should read:
"...we must, as teachers, pass the annual updating tests." or:
"...we teachers, must pass the annual updating tests."
"as a pupil/student" should also be between commas.
"always will be educated "---> "will always be educated"
"by teachers with fresh and updated knowledge" would sound better if it was:
"by teachers whose knowledge is (always) fresh and updated"
"Therefore can we boast with that our educations always will keep..." should be:
"Therefore, we can boast about our education (system) keeping always the highest quality"
I think that you have SO much patience Lilian, you could have reject it, thank you for not!!!! One thing, the last row is in plural... I'll edit to your propsals now.
I forgot that "makes" in the first line, it should be plural "make" since it refers to two institutions (Creative Nail Design and Backscratchers). Am I right?