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| | 10 Május 2008 06:29 |
| kfetoHozzászólások száma: 953 | hi lilian,
no i mean it exactly like it says. it should be read together with second part of the sentence after the semicolon. maybe i should change it into a comma and lose the capital A?
i don't see what's wrong with'to act upon' |
| | 12 Május 2008 19:50 |
| | OK kfeto, I will also delete my messages and let another expert take care of this evaluation. |
| | 12 Május 2008 19:52 |
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| | 12 Május 2008 20:21 |
| kfetoHozzászólások száma: 953 | i never asked you to delete any msg.
i did disagree with your corrections and asked you to either enforce them yourself as an expert or ask an expert to mediate. i deleted it because i felt it was better to ask this in a pm which i did.
you deleted so that one cant asses anymore whether my request was reasonable or not.
so much for peer review.
btw: whether IS used correctly here
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| | 12 Május 2008 23:13 |
| | Hi kfeto
I would simply put an "s" at "premonition" and include "or a few" between commas.
I wondered whether by "bad" forethoughts, you could put "serious" forethoughts (I don't know what the Turkish reads, but "bad" seems to be in dichotomy with the idea of it having been a good idea to have followed any wild hunches).
Let me know what you think.
As this is a meaning only, and the English is really quite fine for the rest, I have already set the poll
Bises
Tantine |
| | 13 Május 2008 11:53 |
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| | 13 Május 2008 23:23 |
| kfetoHozzászólások száma: 953 | hello tantine
the original says bad.
i guess they mean bad hunch being good by avoiding a situation or not doing something thanks to them |
| | 14 Május 2008 00:09 |
| | Hi kfeto
It looks good to me I'll validate.
Bises
Tantine |
| | 14 Május 2008 03:16 |
| | "ominous" forethoughts? |
| | 14 Május 2008 18:12 |
| | Ooooooh Ian,
That's a nice one!! I didn't think of "ominous", but I quite like it, and it would be closer to "bad" than "serious".
What do you think kfeto?
Bises
Tantine |
| | 14 Május 2008 22:25 |
| kfetoHozzászólások száma: 953 | |
| | 14 Május 2008 23:55 |
| | Ok Thanks boys, I'll edit it with "ominous".
Bisous
Tantine |
| | 15 Május 2008 08:07 |
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