Hi Bilge Ertan
The English looks mostly fine. A few suggestions to improve it:
- 'My English isn't very good' sounds better than 'so good'.
- 'I entered to' is gramatically incorrect. In this case (Facebook) we would say 'I logged into my account'.
- 'at night': in this case, 'one night' would be better.
- 'in tomorrow morning' -> the next morning
- I apologize
to you
- 'In my account I had my childhood friends' sounds better than 'there were my ...' (I think there must be another, better way of saying this but I can't think of it just now)
- 'we could contact with each other' -> we could contact each other / we could keep in touch with each other
- last sentence: .. so that my account may be opened again.
Do you agree with my suggestions?
If so, please change your translation (or I can do it for you) so that I can set a poll.
If not, please let me know
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