Përkthime - Greqisht-Anglisht - Το χαμόγελο σου...

Hi User10,

This text sounds a bit weird. Perhaps it's the tenses you chose. I don't know a word in Greek therefore I'll just suggest what I "guess" would match the meaning and at the same time sounds natural in English, OK?
Please, tell me if the meaning changes in any way.

Your smile brought me closer to you every day. I wanted to touch it, but the more I looked at it the more it sent me away. I never wanted to lose it! (I wish I never lost it? ) I would give anything (again) to have it back and keep in mind that I love you more than anything else in the world...If I lose you I'll be lost...

Hi Lilian,

I don't think meaning changes, I'll edit the text according to your suggestions. Thanks

Το χαμόγελο σου με έφερνε κάθε μερα πιο κοντά σου, ήθελα να το αγγίξω,μα όσο πιο πολύ το κοιτούσα τοσο πιο πολύ με ταξίδευε! Ποτέ δεν ήθελα να το αποχωριστώ!Θέλω να δώσω ξανά τα πάντα για να το ξανακερδίσω..και να ξέρεις ότι σʹαγαπάω όσο τίποτα άλλο στον κόσμο..Αν σε χάσω θα χαθώ..