Your smile brought me closer to you every day. I wanted to touch it, but the more I looked at it the more it sent me away. I never wanted to lose it!I would give anything (again) to have it back and keep in mind that I love you more than anything else in the world...If I lose you I'll be lost...
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lit."it made me travel..."
Dernière édition ou validation par lilian canale - 22 Octobre 2010 12:31
This text sounds a bit weird. Perhaps it's the tenses you chose. I don't know a word in Greek therefore I'll just suggest what I "guess" would match the meaning and at the same time sounds natural in English, OK?
Please, tell me if the meaning changes in any way.
Your smile brought me closer to you every day. I wanted to touch it, but the more I looked at it the more it sent me away. I never wanted to lose it! (I wish I never lost it? ) I would give anything (again) to have it back and keep in mind that I love you more than anything else in the world...If I lose you I'll be lost...