Tafsiri - Kibsonia-Kiingereza - volim me

Hello - the translation is good but I would make some changes such as in the line :
2 -With captured hands I will hug you,-( I would use I will embrace you).
7 -Sve mi možeš uzeti, was translated as -You could take all of me - but it should be you can take it all from me ( exe --take everything I have from me)
9-Do kraja me izluditi, - is translated as You could drive me crazy, - but it should be you coud drive me crazy until the end (endlessly or any other synonym)
11 and 13 -Odvedi me, -was translated as take me - I would add away...take me away
12 - Ovdje guše me... - was translated as Here they are choking me... - which was literal translation and the maning of it that she is staying out of breath amongst all the people she is surrounded with.

Hey Lakil, thnx for the correction. I was expecting someone to give me a hand here Unfortunately, can't remember any other verb for "ovdje guše me"... Pls, be my guest

Hello Roller-Coaster - Maybe instead of "Here they are choking me..." you could use - "Here I can't breathe..." ..I think it better conveys the meaning of the original...Just my opinion. :-))

Thanks everybody!

Hi Roller-Coaster,
We could easily say "Here they are suffocating me."
I'll change it to that, because it will be closer to the original meaning, I think!

That's what I wanted to hear Thank you very much