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Idź w góry
Stań na ich szczycie
Wyobraź sobie, że jesteś jedną z nich
Twój oddech zwolni
Usłyszysz w sobie ciszę
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Go to the mountains
Stand on their peaks
Imagine you are one of them
Hold up your breath
Wait for a moment
And in your soul
You’ll hear the silence
Unknown before
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Validat sau editat ultima dată de către lilian canale - 27 Noiembrie 2009 13:35
Ultimele mesaje | | | | |
26 Noiembrie 2009 15:37 | | | Hi Ðндрей ÐлекÑандров,
Fine rhyme you got!  | | |
26 Noiembrie 2009 15:47 | | | Thanks, lilian canale.
Well, I'm trying to do my best | | |
26 Noiembrie 2009 16:17 | | | Beautiful translation indeed! Thank you!!! 
Only one remark of mine:
Imagine there’s one of them --> Imagine you are one of them
ps. You add the line "Wait for a moment" but I like it so much that I think to add it also to my Polish version.
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26 Noiembrie 2009 16:33 | | | "And in your soul" - I w twojej duszy
Literally: "w sobie"= "in you", but I like your proposition more.
Well, I must say that your English version is much better than my Polish one, hehe! But you really feel the poem! Maybe you should start writing poetry!  | | |
27 Noiembrie 2009 17:23 | | | Well, thank you very much. 
Actually, I've never translated poetry into English before... |
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