Idź w góry Stań na ich szczycie Wyobraź sobie, że jesteś jedną z nich Twój oddech zwolni Usłyszysz w sobie ciszę Jakiej wcześniej nie znałeś
Go to the mountains Stand on their peaks Imagine you are one of them Hold up your breath Wait for a moment And in your soul You’ll hear the silence Unknown before
lilian canale에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2009년 11월 27일 13:35
Literally: "w sobie"= "in you", but I like your proposition more.
Well, I must say that your English version is much better than my Polish one, hehe! But you really feel the poem! Maybe you should start writing poetry!