anlatacak çok şeyim var ama neyse boşver senin için profilime müzik ekledim bu senden son dileyim dinlersen sevinirim good bye ben gecmişi unutum sana mutluluklar
I have a lot to tell you but never mind. I added some music to my profile, my last wish is for you to listen to it. I'll be happy if you did. Good bye, I forgot about the past, I wish you happiness
Dernière édition ou validation par Lein - 19 Juillet 2010 13:43
Hi gulbeste,
as Francky said in his post, in English the word 'I' should always be written with a capital letter - please remember this for your next translations
Also, the letters at the first word of every sentence should be capitalised.
The English looks fine, I have set a poll
I added some music to my profile, my last wish is for you to listen to it....> I added for you some music to my profile, my last wish is from you to listen to it.