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Titre	Kahin Door Wadion Mai ...Kashish
Texte Proposé par Pavel Mustaine	Langue de départ: Hindi Kahin Door Wadion Mai ...Kashish Kahin door Wadion mai Kashh Hum Tum hotey Intihayi Mohbbat ki kashish Hum Tum Aankhon se kehtey Koi na dekhey, na kisi ki ho Parwah Hum Dono hojaye chalo kuch dair ke liye Gumrah

Titre	Deep into Nature
Traduction Anglais Traduit par deysub	Langue d'arrivée: Anglais Deep into Nature, you and I might have been filled with desire of endless love, you and I expressing it with our eyes. No one will see and no one will care So let we two lose our way for a while
Commentaires pour la traduction	Far in the nature..... Far in the nature, me and you might have been The want of endless, love me and you express through eyes No one has to watch, no care for anyone Let two of us have lost our way for sometime. could be this if you approve: I think that this is a poem and the English might have been written something like this: Deep into Nature Deep into Nature, you and I might have been filled with desire of endless love, you and I expressing it with our eyes. No one will see and no one will care So let we two lose our way for a while

Dernière édition ou validation par dramati - 11 Décembre 2007 08:29

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	Auteur	Message
		2 Décembre 2007 01:45
	kafetzou Nombre de messages: 7963	Hi deysub We've got a few problems here: 1)Far in the nature, = Far in the wilderness? 2) me and you --> you and I 3) The want of endless, --> The want of endless what? Should it be endlessness? 4) love me and you express through eyes --> Why is one of these in the command form and the other is not? Can we say, "Love me and express through your eyes"? And then, "express" needs an object - express what? 5) No one has to watch, no care for anyone --> Maybe this should be "No one needs to see, it doesn't concern anyone" 6) Let two of us have lost our way for sometime. --> ??? What is "Let" doing here?
		11 Décembre 2007 05:35
	dramati Nombre de messages: 972	Yes, There is a problem that we can't get language speakers to respond to this one. It has been up for a while, and I wrote Deysab and got his approval to make some changes in the English, but still no response. I think we should have an administrator to check this page.
		11 Décembre 2007 05:49
	kafetzou Nombre de messages: 7963	I am an administrator. But the problem is that this language is underrepresented among cucumis users. We can either trust Deysub and pass the translation or let it sit. But I have one question - what is the text in the comments field? CC: dramati
		11 Décembre 2007 06:23
	dramati Nombre de messages: 972	He felt this would be more accurate when we corresponded: That is the reason for the text in the comments field: Far in the nature..... Far in the nature, me and you might have been The want of endless, love me and you express through eyes No one has to watch, no care for anyone Let two of us have lost our way for sometime. could be this if you approve: I think that this is a poem and the English might have been written something like this: Deep into Nature Deep into Nature, you and I might have been filled with desire of endless love, you and I expressing it with our eyes. No one will see and no one will care So lets we two lose our way for a while
		11 Décembre 2007 14:25
	kafetzou Nombre de messages: 7963	OK, but I think you should take the extra text out of the comments field.