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Translation - Turkish-English - haksızlık etmeden doğan güneşe ...

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haksızlık etmeden doğan güneşe ...
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Submitted by djolsedantas
Source language: Turkish

haksızlık etmeden doğan güneşe bütün aydınlıkları içime sindirmek gibi mülteci isteklerim oldu ara sıra
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frase que me mandaram...

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before edits:
"hhaksizlik etmeden dogan güneŞe bütün aydinliklari içime sindirmek gibi mülteci isteklerim oldu ara sıra"

-handyy-

Title
without being unfair to rising sun...
Translation
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Translated by kiminnesi
Target language: English

From time to time, I had refugee desires, such as to drink in all of the light, without doing an injustice to the rising sun.
Remarks about the translation
Expert's comment: I changed a bit of the wording to make it sound more poetic, but I had a lot of trouble with the phrase translated by "refugee desires", which I thought at first was an idiom in Turkish, but which apparently is not.
Last validated or edited by kafetzou - 25 October 2009 18:48





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13 October 2009 17:12

lilian canale
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handyy?

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20 October 2009 13:53

handyy
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Well, the original sentence is highly figurative. So, it can sound weird when translating into English. Still, this one, I think, needs edit. It can be translated in a better way, I guess. If I translated it, I would say:

"I occasionally had such fugitive willings/wishes as saturating myself with all kinds of illumination, without being unfair to rising sun."

20 October 2009 14:01

handyy
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"aydınlık" in the original can mean lots of things such as "light, clarification, spiritual or intellectual enlightenment, etc.". I thought "illumination" can meet all of these meanings, but if there is a better word, it can be replaced, of course.

20 October 2009 14:31

lilian canale
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I don't get that: "without being unfair to rising sun"

20 October 2009 15:31

handyy
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Tell me what you didn't understand exactly? Is it about the semantic or the syntax?

This is a verbatim translation: "without being unfair/treating unjustly to rising sun".

20 October 2009 15:33

handyy
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Well, how about? :

"Never being unfair to the rising sun, I occasionally had such fugitive willings/wishes as saturating myself with all kinds of illumination."

20 October 2009 15:49

lilian canale
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Kafetzou?

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25 October 2009 08:03

kafetzou
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What are "mülteci istekleri"? Is this an idiom in Turkish? I don't really understand it, and any English speaker reading "fugitive wishes" would be equally in the dark.

25 October 2009 09:46

kiminnesi
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Actually it's not an idiom in Turkish as far as I know. I'd assume it's just a figurative phrase, part of a lyrical content. So I was in the dark as well... Open to suggestions, though.

25 October 2009 18:48

kafetzou
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OK - thanks. I've edited the translation and accepted it.