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제목	Anes lumenjve
본문 kfeto에 의해서 게시됨	원문 언어: 알바니아어 Anes lumenjve Arratisur, syrgjynosur, Raskapitur dhe katosur Po vajtonj pa funt, pa shpresÃ«, AnÃ«s ElbÃ«s, anÃ«s Spree-sÃ«. Ku e lam' e ku na mbeti Vaj-vatani e mjer-mileti AnÃ«s detit i palarÃ«, AnÃ«s dritÃ«s i paparÃ«, PranÃ« sofrÃ«s i pangrÃ«nÃ«, PranÃ« dijes i panxÃ«nÃ«, Lakuriq dhe i dregosur, Trup e shpirt i sakatosur?

제목	by the rivers
번역 영어 eleonora13에 의해서 번역되어짐	번역될 언어: 영어 By the rivers Fugitive, out in exile, Exhausted, and threatened, They mourn endlessly and hopeless By the Elbes, by the Spreese Where we left it, and where it stayed Oh the homeland, and the poor nation Beside the dirty ocean Beside the light, unseen Near the dinner table, uneaten Close by the clue, that doesn't fit, Naked and tortured, Body and soul murdered?
이 번역물에 관한 주의사항	Elbes and Spreese are names of rivers in Albania so i left it as it is.

에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2008년 5월 31일 13:09

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		2008년 5월 18일 02:32
	lilian canale 게시물 갯수: 14972	Hi eleonora, Since this seems to be a poem, I'd try to make it look like one in English too. Perhaps we could change some structures and words to achieve that. - What about instead of "without end" using "endlessly" or instead of "without hope" using "hopeless".? I think this line would be quite shorter and similar to the original. "They mourn endlessly and hopeless" - beside the Elbes, beside the Spreese (I'd use "by" instead : By the Elbes, by the Spreese) - "Where we left it" What does "it" stand for? Wouldn't it be "him"? Isn't it talking about a person? I didn't understand that part. - Does the original repeat "poor" in the 7th line? - "unwashed ocean" ? - Perhaps we can change "mutilated" into "murdered" so that it makes a better rhyme with "tortured". What do you think? Poetry is always difficult, but you did a great job. These are just a few suggestions in order to get a nice rhyme. It's up to you, now.
		2008년 5월 21일 02:18
	lilian canale 게시물 갯수: 14972	Hi eleonora13, Two days later, I'm still waiting...
		2008년 5월 25일 22:53
	eleonora13 게시물 갯수: 19	I'm sorry but I'am having some difficulties with my internet connection lately.I really think that your suggestions are great.Would you like to do the editing?
		2008년 5월 25일 23:32
	lilian canale 게시물 갯수: 14972	Hi eleonora, no problem. You can edit it if you agree.
		2008년 5월 31일 20:42
	kfeto 게시물 갯수: 953	ok thank you both girls