अनुबाद - अल्बेनियन-अंग्रेजी - Anes lumenjve

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Category Poetry

This translation request is "Meaning only".

शीर्षक

Anes lumenjve

हरफ

kfetoद्वारा बुझाइएको

स्रोत भाषा: अल्बेनियन

Anes lumenjve

Arratisur, syrgjynosur,
Raskapitur dhe katosur
Po vajtonj pa funt, pa shpresÃ«,
AnÃ«s ElbÃ«s, anÃ«s Spree-sÃ«.

Ku e lam' e ku na mbeti
Vaj-vatani e mjer-mileti
AnÃ«s detit i palarÃ«,
AnÃ«s dritÃ«s i paparÃ«,
PranÃ« sofrÃ«s i pangrÃ«nÃ«,
PranÃ« dijes i panxÃ«nÃ«,
Lakuriq dhe i dregosur,
Trup e shpirt i sakatosur?

शीर्षक	by the rivers
अनुबाद अंग्रेजी eleonora13द्वारा अनुबाद गरिएको	अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने भाषा: अंग्रेजी By the rivers Fugitive, out in exile, Exhausted, and threatened, They mourn endlessly and hopeless By the Elbes, by the Spreese Where we left it, and where it stayed Oh the homeland, and the poor nation Beside the dirty ocean Beside the light, unseen Near the dinner table, uneaten Close by the clue, that doesn't fit, Naked and tortured, Body and soul murdered?
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी	Elbes and Spreese are names of rivers in Albania so i left it as it is.

Validated by lilian canale

- 2008年 मे 31日 13:09

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	लेखक	सन्देश
		2008年 मे 18日 02:32
	lilian canale चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972	Hi eleonora, Since this seems to be a poem, I'd try to make it look like one in English too. Perhaps we could change some structures and words to achieve that. - What about instead of "without end" using "endlessly" or instead of "without hope" using "hopeless".? I think this line would be quite shorter and similar to the original. "They mourn endlessly and hopeless" - beside the Elbes, beside the Spreese (I'd use "by" instead : By the Elbes, by the Spreese) - "Where we left it" What does "it" stand for? Wouldn't it be "him"? Isn't it talking about a person? I didn't understand that part. - Does the original repeat "poor" in the 7th line? - "unwashed ocean" ? - Perhaps we can change "mutilated" into "murdered" so that it makes a better rhyme with "tortured". What do you think? Poetry is always difficult, but you did a great job. These are just a few suggestions in order to get a nice rhyme. It's up to you, now.
		2008年 मे 21日 02:18
	lilian canale चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972	Hi eleonora13, Two days later, I'm still waiting...
		2008年 मे 25日 22:53
	eleonora13 चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 19	I'm sorry but I'am having some difficulties with my internet connection lately.I really think that your suggestions are great.Would you like to do the editing?
		2008年 मे 25日 23:32
	lilian canale चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 14972	Hi eleonora, no problem. You can edit it if you agree.
		2008年 मे 31日 20:42
	kfeto चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 953	ok thank you both girls