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翻译 - 阿尔巴尼亚语-英语 - Anes lumenjve

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标题	Anes lumenjve
正文提交 kfeto	源语言: 阿尔巴尼亚语 Anes lumenjve Arratisur, syrgjynosur, Raskapitur dhe katosur Po vajtonj pa funt, pa shpresÃ«, AnÃ«s ElbÃ«s, anÃ«s Spree-sÃ«. Ku e lam' e ku na mbeti Vaj-vatani e mjer-mileti AnÃ«s detit i palarÃ«, AnÃ«s dritÃ«s i paparÃ«, PranÃ« sofrÃ«s i pangrÃ«nÃ«, PranÃ« dijes i panxÃ«nÃ«, Lakuriq dhe i dregosur, Trup e shpirt i sakatosur?

标题	by the rivers
翻译英语翻译 eleonora13	目的语言: 英语 By the rivers Fugitive, out in exile, Exhausted, and threatened, They mourn endlessly and hopeless By the Elbes, by the Spreese Where we left it, and where it stayed Oh the homeland, and the poor nation Beside the dirty ocean Beside the light, unseen Near the dinner table, uneaten Close by the clue, that doesn't fit, Naked and tortured, Body and soul murdered?
给这篇翻译加备注	Elbes and Spreese are names of rivers in Albania so i left it as it is.

由lilian canale

认可或编辑 - 2008年五月 31日 13:09

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	作者	帖子
		2008年五月 18日 02:32
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	Hi eleonora, Since this seems to be a poem, I'd try to make it look like one in English too. Perhaps we could change some structures and words to achieve that. - What about instead of "without end" using "endlessly" or instead of "without hope" using "hopeless".? I think this line would be quite shorter and similar to the original. "They mourn endlessly and hopeless" - beside the Elbes, beside the Spreese (I'd use "by" instead : By the Elbes, by the Spreese) - "Where we left it" What does "it" stand for? Wouldn't it be "him"? Isn't it talking about a person? I didn't understand that part. - Does the original repeat "poor" in the 7th line? - "unwashed ocean" ? - Perhaps we can change "mutilated" into "murdered" so that it makes a better rhyme with "tortured". What do you think? Poetry is always difficult, but you did a great job. These are just a few suggestions in order to get a nice rhyme. It's up to you, now.
		2008年五月 21日 02:18
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	Hi eleonora13, Two days later, I'm still waiting...
		2008年五月 25日 22:53
	eleonora13 文章总计: 19	I'm sorry but I'am having some difficulties with my internet connection lately.I really think that your suggestions are great.Would you like to do the editing?
		2008年五月 25日 23:32
	lilian canale 文章总计: 14972	Hi eleonora, no problem. You can edit it if you agree.
		2008年五月 31日 20:42
	kfeto 文章总计: 953	ok thank you both girls