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This translation request is "Meaning only".
शीर्षक
Sie haben sich für den kostenlosen...
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shefi24skद्वारा बुझाइएको
स्रोत भाषा: जर्मन

Sie haben sich für den kostenlosen E-Mail-Newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" angemeldet.
Damit wir mit der kostenlosen Belieferung beginnen können,
bitten wir Sie nun noch, Ihren Auftrag zu bestätigen.

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अनुबाद
अंग्रेजी

gamineद्वारा अनुबाद गरिएको
अनुबाद गर्नुपर्ने भाषा: अंग्रेजी

You have registered for the free e-mail
newsletter "Natural modern medicine".
In order for us to proceed, we ask you to confirm your order.
अनुबादका लागि चाहिन सक्ने थप जानकारी
Natural modern medicine or: current natural medicine
Validated by Lein - 2010年 जनवरी 8日 13:43





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सन्देश

2010年 जनवरी 7日 14:57

Lein
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 3389
Hi Gamine

'Sie' is used as the polite form of (singular) you here. I saw you translated it this way in the last sentence, but the first one says 'they' instead

My suggestion:

You have registered for the free electronic newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" (or your translation which is fine).
In order for us to start sending it, free, we ask you to confirm your order.

What do you think?
I am not completely happy with 'start sending it', but I think 'supply' is not the best word here either. Once I have started a poll we can see if anyone else has a suggestion

2010年 जनवरी 7日 18:07

gamine
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4611
Hi Lein. I have edited the last line as you suggested. Find it much better.

Couldn't we use:"proceed" here instead of "supply" or "start sending it"?

2010年 जनवरी 7日 19:53

Lein
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 3389
Yes, that's a good suggestion! I have edited. I have also removed 'free' because I think the first sentence makes it clear already that the newsletter will be free. Let me know if you don't agree!

2010年 जनवरी 7日 20:09

gamine
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 4611
Of course, I do , dear Lein. You're completely right.
Thanks for your help.

2010年 जनवरी 8日 00:18

gbernsdorff
चिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 240
current natural medicine ?

2010年 जनवरी 8日 12:06

Delfin71
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They have currently signed up for free e-mail newsletter, "Natural Medicine".
Before we can start with the free supply,
please confirm your order.