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7 Januari 2010 14:57

Lein
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Hi Gamine

'Sie' is used as the polite form of (singular) you here. I saw you translated it this way in the last sentence, but the first one says 'they' instead

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You have registered for the free electronic newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" (or your translation which is fine).
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What do you think?
I am not completely happy with 'start sending it', but I think 'supply' is not the best word here either. Once I have started a poll we can see if anyone else has a suggestion

7 Januari 2010 18:07

gamine
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Hi Lein. I have edited the last line as you suggested. Find it much better.

Couldn't we use:"proceed" here instead of "supply" or "start sending it"?

7 Januari 2010 19:53

Lein
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Yes, that's a good suggestion! I have edited. I have also removed 'free' because I think the first sentence makes it clear already that the newsletter will be free. Let me know if you don't agree!

7 Januari 2010 20:09

gamine
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Of course, I do , dear Lein. You're completely right.
Thanks for your help.

8 Januari 2010 00:18

gbernsdorff
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current natural medicine ?

8 Januari 2010 12:06

Delfin71
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