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Translation - Spanish-Greek - Aqui se queda la clara,La entrañable...

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Title
Aqui se queda la clara,La entrañable...
Text
Submitted by danis13
Source language: Spanish

Aquí se queda la clara, La entrañable trasparencia, De tu querida presencia

Title
Εδώ είναι η καθαρη, η βαθιά διαφάνεια της αγαπημένης σου παρουσίας
Translation
Greek

Translated by irini
Target language: Greek

Εδώ είναι η αγνή, η βαθιά διαφάνεια της αγαπημένης σου παρουσίας
Remarks about the translation
Do you think αγνή would be better than καθαρή; Or ξεκάθαρη, σαφής;
Validated by chrysso91 - 30 September 2007 11:34





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27 September 2007 21:47

irini
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For those of you who don't speak Greek: My translation goes " here is the clear, deep transparency of your beloved presence ".

For anyone who hasn't recognnised the song is "Hasta siempre comandante" (if I didn't butcher the title) which I think has become MTV fashionable these days again (I forget who's singing it now).

Now I know this song since I was really young (parents loved it so you can say I grew up with it) but I can't say I was ever sure about this part of the lyrics.

I am particularly unsure of "entrañable".

What's your opinion?


CC: chrysso91 guilon kafetzou Lila F. pirulito

27 September 2007 21:46

irini
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Note: I edited the translation and the message. The experts may receive the unedited English translation so check the message above.

28 September 2007 00:52

kafetzou
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I think this is correct. See my comments under the rejected Greek translation.

28 September 2007 01:16

irini
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Whoops! I didn't even go to that translation's page, I just rejected it from the general translations for evaluation page! Sorry