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Перевод - Румынский-Английский - Amintirea este singurul rai de unde ...Текущий статус Перевод
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Категория Предложение - Любoвь / Дружба | Amintirea este singurul rai de unde ... | | Язык, с которого нужно перевести: Румынский
Amintirea este singurul rai de unde nu poÅ£i fi izgonit. | Комментарии для переводчика | <edit>diacritic added</edit> (01/21 francky thanks to Freya's notification) |
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| The recollection is the only Heaven from where... | | Язык, на который нужно перевести: Английский
Memories are the only Heaven from where you can't be sent away. |
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Последнее изменение было внесено пользователем Lein - 24 Январь 2011 11:33
Последнее сообщение | | | | | 21 Январь 2011 17:24 | | LeinКол-во сообщений: 3389 | Hi Ionut Andrei
The English looks fine as far as I can see, so I'll set a poll. Two questions:
- Do you know and could you explain what the recollection is? We may need to clarify this in the notes.
- Do you mean 'chased away' (you have got in, someone chases you out, running after you) or 'turned away' (they won't let you in)? | | | 21 Январь 2011 18:20 | | FreyaКол-во сообщений: 1910 | Hi!
This is another quote, this time of Jean Paul Richter. The English version that I've found on the net is this: "Our memories are the only paradise from which we can never be expelled."
In Romanian the subject is singular: our memory, remembrance, but in English should be plural, it sounds better, I think - it's about the paradise made of (our) good memories.
Hope it helps.
| | | 21 Январь 2011 18:44 | | | As fi folosit cuvantul memory in loc de recollection. | | | 21 Январь 2011 18:47 | | FreyaКол-во сообщений: 1910 | BUT, there are some differences between the text submitted here and the English version on the net: here it's written at 2nd person, singular, "you", and on the net, in English is written for 1st person, plural, "we" + the "never" that doesn't appear here.
I don't know a better translation if there is one, but the way that Ionut Andrei translated is faithful to the source, now it's only up to you, Lein, to make it look natural in English, based on the original that was submitted here.
It's quite hard when quotes are submitted in a different language than the original. | | | 22 Январь 2011 17:51 | | | asa m-am gandit si eu dar am zis ca poate gresesc eu chiar daca stiu engleza. de aceea l-am pus pe acest site la tradus | | | 24 Январь 2011 11:34 | | LeinКол-во сообщений: 3389 | Done
I have made two small edits, hope everyone agrees |
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