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Dịch - Romanian-English - poezie de iubire

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Nhóm chuyên mục Literature - Arts / Creation / Imagination

Title	poezie de iubire
Text Submitted by MÃ¥ddie	Source language: Romanian ÃŽÅ¢I SPUN... ÃŽÅ£i spun... DacÄƒ M-ai sÄƒruta pe obraz, M-aÅŸ spÄƒla, Cu bÄƒgare de seamÄƒ De teamÄƒ SÄƒ nu tulbur Limpezimea sÄƒrutului tÄƒu... ÃŽÅ£i spun... DacÄƒ M-ai mÃ®ngÃ®ia pe creÅŸtet, M-aÅŸ pieptÄƒna Cu bÄƒgare de seamÄƒ De teamÄƒ SÄƒ nu-ntin Mireasma atingerii tale... ÃŽÅ£i spun... DacÄƒ Mi-ai ÅŸopti cÄƒ mÄƒ iubeÅŸti, AÅŸ respira Cu bÄƒgare de seamÄƒ De teamÄƒ SÄƒ nu risipesc Vraja ÅŸoaptelor tale...
Remarks about the translation	doresc sa traduceti acest poem in asa fel incit mesajul sa ramina nealterat chiar daca forma sufera unele mici modificari.multumesc

Title	Love poem
Dịch English Translated by MÃ¥ddie	Target language: English Iâ€™m telling you... If You kissed me on my cheek I would wash carefully For fear Of disturbing The clarity of your kissâ€¦ Iâ€™m telling you... If You caressed the top of my head, I would comb Carefully For fear Of staining The scent of your touch Iâ€™m telling you... If You whispered you loved me I would breath Carefully For fear Of scattering The spell Of your whispers...
Remarks about the translation	Hope this will help. I have seen this text is waiting for a translation for some time and maybe it will be easier with a bridge in English.

Validated by lilian canale

- 17 Tháng 5 2008 15:53

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	Tác giả	Bài gửi
		16 Tháng 5 2008 22:52
	lilian canale Tổng số bài gửi: 14972	Hi Madeleine, This must be a really nice text, I say "must be" trusting your excellent version in English. I just suggest a small change in structure: when you say "for fear not to disturb" I would rather say: "for fear of diturbing" and the same, every time this words appear. What do you think?
		17 Tháng 5 2008 10:50
	MÃ¥ddie Tổng số bài gửi: 1285	Hi Lilian, I'll change it. And in my opinion, yes, it is a very nice poem Madeleine