Translation - Norwegian-English - De borrene DT5040 er for lange for kunden.Kunden...

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De borrene DT5040 er for lange for kunden.Kunden...

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dewalt2008

Source language: Norwegian

De borrene DT5040 er for lange.Kunden Ã¸nsker de samme stÃ¸rrelsene som pÃ¥ Dormer bor. Dvs de som vi har sendt hendvendelse pÃ¥ tidligere.

Kan vi produsere en bor i 10,5mm med arbeidslengde pÃ¥ 15mm og totallengde ca 35mm, borrene skal brukes pÃ¥ syrefast stÃ¥l. Antall ca 300 bor.

HÃ¥per dere kommer tilbake raskt pÃ¥ dette, da det haster for min kunde.

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The drills DT5040 are too long. The customer

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English

Translated by

pias

Target language: English

The drills DT5040 are too long. The customer wishes to have the sizes as on Dormer drill. I.e. the ones that we sent a letter about earlier.

Can we produce a drill 10,5mm with worklength 15mm and total length approx. 35mm? The drills are to be used on acid proof steel. Quantity approx. 300 drills.

Hope that you will reply fast on this, because it's urgent for my customer.

Validated by lilian canale

- 20 May 2008 03:08

Last messages

	Author	Message
		17 May 2008 02:27
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	Hi Pia, "because it's in a hurry for my customer." well, you have some options to make this line sound better, you may choose the one that better conveys the original, OK? "because my customer is in a hurry." "because it's urgent to my customer." "because my customer is in urgent need of it."
		17 May 2008 09:23
	pias Number of messages: 8113	Ok, thank you! I'll edit.
		19 May 2008 17:48
	Tantine Number of messages: 2747	Hi Pias, Hi Lilly I have some suggestions for correction: The drills DT5040 is too long. Either: "The drills ... are too long" Or: "The drill ... is too long" The customer wish to have... Either: "The customers wish to have" Or: "The customer wishes Can we produce a drill 10,5mm with worklenght 15mm and total length approx. 35mm, the drills shall be used on acid proof steel. If this is a question there should be a question mark at the end of the phrase. If it is not a question "Can we" should read "We can". "We can produce 10.5mm drill with 15mm worklength ... drills are to be used..." "...because it's urgent for my customer." Hope this helps Bises Tantine
		19 May 2008 17:55
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	Thanks Tantine Pia, would you consider editing those suggestions? Then, the job will be perfect!
		19 May 2008 18:24
	pias Number of messages: 8113	Thank you so much Tantine and boss Lilian! I'm happy to have such a good "teachers". I'll edit right away.
		20 May 2008 01:15
	Bamsa Number of messages: 1524	Not so important Accordig to what I have learned at the engineer school, in technical English, Acidproof is one word.
		20 May 2008 09:56
	pias Number of messages: 8113	Thank you Bamsa Anyway, I think that the boss (Lilian) already has accepted it as it was.