Translation - Turkish-English - SayÄ±n ingilizcem o kadar iyi deÄŸildir derdimi...

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SayÄ±n ingilizcem o kadar iyi deÄŸildir derdimi...

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Source language: Turkish

derdimi anlatmaya Ã§alÄ±ÅŸacam . benim bir sorunum var o sorunuda sizin Ã§Ã¶zebileceÄŸinize inanÄ±yorum . facebook hesabÄ±ma gece girdim ertesi gÃ¼n sabah girdiÄŸimde hesabÄ±mÄ±n kapatÄ±lmÄ±ÅŸ olduÄŸunu farkettim 3 senedir facebook Ã¼yesiyim ve her zamanki gibi arkadaÅŸlarÄ±mla konuÅŸ videolarÄ± izleyip Ã§Ä±ktÄ±m eÄŸer bir hata yaptÄ±ysam Ã¶zÃ¼r dilerim hesabÄ±mda Ã§ocukluk arkadaÅŸlarÄ±m vardÄ± sadece facebook Ã¼zerinden iletiÅŸim saÄŸlÄ±yabiliyorduk ve onlarÄ±n hepsini kaybettim hesabÄ±mÄ±n tekrar aÃ§Ä±lmasÄ± iÃ§in sizinle iletiÅŸime geÃ§tim

Title	My English isn't so good but
Translation English Translated by Bilge Ertan	Target language: English My English isn't very good but I'll try to tell you my problem. I believe you can solve it. I logged into my account one night and in the next morning, I realized that it had been closed. I have been a member of Facebook for 3 years and as usual I had talked to my friends, I had watched videos before closing it. If I made a mistake, I apologize to you. My childhood friends were in my account. Facebook was the only way we could keep in touch with each other and now I have lost all of them. I contact you so that my account may be opened again.
Remarks about the translation	I hope it's fine. Thanks.

Validated by Lein - 26 July 2010 11:38

Last messages

	Author	Message
		20 July 2010 13:25
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Hi Bilge Ertan The English looks mostly fine. A few suggestions to improve it: - 'My English isn't very good' sounds better than 'so good'. - 'I entered to' is gramatically incorrect. In this case (Facebook) we would say 'I logged into my account'. - 'at night': in this case, 'one night' would be better. - 'in tomorrow morning' -> the next morning - I apologize to you - 'In my account I had my childhood friends' sounds better than 'there were my ...' (I think there must be another, better way of saying this but I can't think of it just now) - 'we could contact with each other' -> we could contact each other / we could keep in touch with each other - last sentence: .. so that my account may be opened again. Do you agree with my suggestions? If so, please change your translation (or I can do it for you) so that I can set a poll. If not, please let me know
		21 July 2010 14:34
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Bilge?
		5 September 2010 01:42
	Bilge Ertan Number of messages: 921	I'm so sorry, I was on holiday and my computer wasn't with me. So I couldn't see what you wrote but it's ok. Thank you very much for your corrections and I apologize 'to' you for my mistakes Good night.
		6 September 2010 14:17
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	No worries. Thanks for your reply