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hi kafe, can you help me here? where does it sound to go wrong?

CC: kafetzou

creating a protocol with serious Edyption companies --> ???
garmnent --> garments
to dedicate production to you --> ???

Please let someone else translate, and if it is accepted you can compare your translation to theirs, OK?

how do you say "cutting a deal" but using the word "protocol"? cutting a protocol? doesnt work...

Please correct Edyption to Egyptian

marhaban, could you please do this translation?

CC: marhaban

This one was not so bad, no ?

OK; if you want to un-reject it, it's OK with me, but it still needs more editing than I can do, because I don't totally understand it (see my comments above), although I admit it helps that it now says Egyptian instead of Edyption!!

CC: elmota cucumis

Unfortunately, I can't unreject, I can only accept a rejected translation.
I'm not good enough in english to evaluate but it's just that I don't see any other member being able to translate arabic-english better than this. But maybe I'm wrong as I dont know everyone now .

No - I agree. Elmota does better than anyone else. I'm going to edit it to what I think it means, and maybe Elmota can tell me if she thinks it's correct.

CC: elmota

yeezzz zats moch betta
but two things, the original script uses the word "protocol" as is, in English, because its very popular, although "arrangement" works fine, but i hope there is a way to fit in "protocol"
second thing is "you would be the sole producer" its the other way round... we are the producers, and we have like, mm, a special line of production for you, but there is no exclusivity in that relationship...
thank you kafe, it is hard for me because i always hated official letters, they throw so much burden at words they actually break them!

I changed the sentence that said "you would be the sole producer" to "to produce these goods exclusively for you" - is that correct?

As for protocol, I'm not aware of it being so popular in English in a business context - it sounds more political to me, which is why I changed it.

no, the production is not exclusive, thats what im trying to say, they are just saying: we will set aside some of our products with ur name on it and send them to u, u know? they do that a lot in dry good market...

OK; thanks. I'll see how I can edit it. Maybe "for you" is enough. What do you think, Elmota?

yes, the best solutions are always the simplest
thank you kafe, so now what? can u un-reject it?

elmota,
copy-paste the edited text into frame of the
new requested translation from this Arabic text, as it wasn't translated yet.

Francky, I've accepted this translation instead. I didn't know I had the power to do that, but apparently I do.

CC: elmota Francky5591

Ok, fine!