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Translation - Icelandic-Spanish - Ãn þÃn ei sólin lengur skÃn hér Alein ég arka...
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Category
Poetry
Title
Ãn þÃn ei sólin lengur skÃn hér Alein ég arka...
Text
Submitted by
pavle_c
Source language: Icelandic
Ãn þÃn ei sólin lengur skÃn hér
Alein ég arka niðrá flugvöll
Þvà er þú fórst þá eitthvað à mér dó
Ég horf'á hafið þvà að þú ert þar
ég hvÃsla nafn þitt en fæ ekkert svar
Allt er svo eymdarlegt án þÃn hér,
komdu til mÃn ,
komdu til mÃn.
Title
Sin ti, el sol ya no brilla más aquÃ
Translation
Spanish
Translated by
lilian canale
Target language: Spanish
Sin ti, el sol ya no brilla más aquÃ
Solo, fui caminando hasta el aeropuerto
Cuando partiste, algo murió en mÃ
Miré hacia el mar porque tú estás allÃ
susurro tu nombre, pero no tengo respuesta.
Todo es tan triste aquà sin ti
ven a mÃ
ven a mÃ.
Remarks about the translation
Gently bridged by Bamsa.
Validated by
guilon
- 27 March 2008 01:22
Last messages
Author
Message
22 March 2008 15:25
TCHOUÉLA
Number of messages: 1
I do not appreciate the way the text has been translated.It seems to me as if the translated text is a poem and the translator might not have tried to reach the depth wich we can find in it.It is what we call in french "une traduction juxtalinéaire ou mot à mot,it means a trans lation which does not consider a text as a whole,focusing on each word"
22 March 2008 15:34
lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi TCHOUÉLA
Would you please tell us how you would transmit the depth you claim is in the text, into Spanish?
We always appreciate poetic licenses in our translations as long as they don't change the original intention of the author.
So, If you have a better idea, be at ease to put it forward.
Thanks.
Lilly.
22 March 2008 15:46
Francky5591
Number of messages: 12396
I think translator tried to "reach the depth" and succeedeed to reach it in a brilliant way, from my personal opinion.
Since you said she didn't, TCHOUÉLA, could you illustrate what you said above just to show us how accurate your translation would have been?
22 March 2008 20:02
Zaizacan
Number of messages: 5
je pense que. "partiste" est incorrect. mieux vaut utiliser : "Cuando te fuiste"
Zaizacan
24 March 2008 14:47
pavle_c
Number of messages: 4
Ese empleo del verbo partir en español no es natural
27 March 2008 01:21
guilon
Number of messages: 1549
A mà ese uso del verbo partir sà que me suena natural en español, más aún en un contexto seudopoético como este.