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2008年 四月 19日 01:22 |
| | Hi Kafetzou 
Wow!! What a declaration!!
I've set a poll 
Bises
Tantine |
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2008年 四月 19日 08:15 |
| | kafetzou bence bir iki yerinde deÄŸiÅŸiklik gerekli
"Sen değilsin sanki yarısı yatağımın "
"You're not there, and it's like my bed is only half "
burada söylenmek istenen şu: yani sen yanımdasın ama bana uzaksın sevişmelerin bile gerçek değil.hatta benden o kadar uzaklaşmıssın ki sana sarılsam bile sıcaklığını hissedemiyorum.(önceki ve sonraki dizelerle bağlantı kur bu anlamları daha net görürsün)
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2008年 四月 19日 08:23 |
| | "İsyanım yanışıma ölüm bile
Susuyor"
"Even death has nothing to say to my revolt, my burning "
isyanım yanışıma; yanışıma isyan ediyorum yani durumuma isyan ediyorum diye yorumluyorum bunu.ardından da bu duruma ölüm bile susuyor diyor. |
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2008年 四月 19日 18:23 |
| | Serba, I made the 2nd change you suggested, but I didn't understand the 1st one - you explained the lines above and below it, but not the line itself - can you analyze the grammar of that line, like you did in your 2nd suggestion? CC: serba |
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2008年 四月 19日 18:32 |
| | Actually, I made a change - maybe I understood what you meant - can you check it please, serba? CC: serba |
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2008年 四月 22日 16:48 |
| | "Sen değilsin sanki yarısı yatağımın "
it is like as if you are not the half of my bed
writer says his bed have two parts half is himself and the other half is his woman.but in this case he feels like other part is not the woman... |
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2008年 四月 22日 17:07 |
| | Thanks, serba - I changed it. |
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2008年 四月 25日 00:34 |
| | Hi Kafetzou Hi Serba
May I validate now? It seems to be ok now
Bises
Tantine |
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2008年 四月 25日 03:53 |
| | I can't say, 'cause it's my translation. Serba would have to give the go-ahead.
CC: serba |
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2008年 四月 25日 07:48 |
| | It's enough for you to just look me in the face
yeter ki bak yüzüme = bir yüzüme baksan bana yeter
yeter ki= I wish it and it is all I wish= as long as
look me in the face and it is enough for me
böyle bir şey olurdu herhalde |
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2008年 四月 25日 07:32 |
| | Üşürüm sarılsam bile
I am cold even I embrace you |
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2008年 四月 25日 07:36 |
| | İsyanım yanışıma ölüm bile
Susuyor
My revolt is because of my burning
even death has nothing to say |
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2008年 四月 25日 07:51 |
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2008年 四月 26日 04:44 |
| | I didn't make the first change, because I don't see any difference between your suggestion and what I wrote, but I did change it according to your 2nd and 3rd suggestions.
Is it OK now, serba? CC: serba |
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2008年 四月 26日 07:44 |
| | should not be "it is enough for me"?
but yours seems to me like "it is enough for you" |
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2008年 四月 26日 08:51 |
| | No - it's "it's enough ... for you to just look me in the face". |
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2008年 四月 26日 12:20 |
| | Good translation, kafetzou.
Congratulations! |
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2008年 四月 26日 17:29 |
| | Thanks, my  , but I couldn't have done it without a little help from my friends.
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2008年 四月 27日 01:15 |
| | It's validated 
Bises à tout le monde
Tantine |
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2008年 四月 27日 02:32 |
| | Merci Tantine, et bises à toi aussi!
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