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| | 19 Avril 2008 01:22 |
| | Hi Kafetzou
Wow!! What a declaration!!
I've set a poll
Bises
Tantine |
| | 19 Avril 2008 08:15 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | kafetzou bence bir iki yerinde deÄŸiÅŸiklik gerekli
"Sen değilsin sanki yarısı yatağımın "
"You're not there, and it's like my bed is only half "
burada söylenmek istenen şu: yani sen yanımdasın ama bana uzaksın sevişmelerin bile gerçek değil.hatta benden o kadar uzaklaşmıssın ki sana sarılsam bile sıcaklığını hissedemiyorum.(önceki ve sonraki dizelerle bağlantı kur bu anlamları daha net görürsün)
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| | 19 Avril 2008 08:23 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | "İsyanım yanışıma ölüm bile
Susuyor"
"Even death has nothing to say to my revolt, my burning "
isyanım yanışıma; yanışıma isyan ediyorum yani durumuma isyan ediyorum diye yorumluyorum bunu.ardından da bu duruma ölüm bile susuyor diyor. |
| | 19 Avril 2008 18:23 |
| | Serba, I made the 2nd change you suggested, but I didn't understand the 1st one - you explained the lines above and below it, but not the line itself - can you analyze the grammar of that line, like you did in your 2nd suggestion? CC: serba |
| | 19 Avril 2008 18:32 |
| | Actually, I made a change - maybe I understood what you meant - can you check it please, serba? CC: serba |
| | 22 Avril 2008 16:48 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | "Sen değilsin sanki yarısı yatağımın "
it is like as if you are not the half of my bed
writer says his bed have two parts half is himself and the other half is his woman.but in this case he feels like other part is not the woman... |
| | 22 Avril 2008 17:07 |
| | Thanks, serba - I changed it. |
| | 25 Avril 2008 00:34 |
| | Hi Kafetzou Hi Serba
May I validate now? It seems to be ok now
Bises
Tantine |
| | 25 Avril 2008 03:53 |
| | I can't say, 'cause it's my translation. Serba would have to give the go-ahead.
CC: serba |
| | 25 Avril 2008 07:48 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | It's enough for you to just look me in the face
yeter ki bak yüzüme = bir yüzüme baksan bana yeter
yeter ki= I wish it and it is all I wish= as long as
look me in the face and it is enough for me
böyle bir şey olurdu herhalde |
| | 25 Avril 2008 07:32 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | Üşürüm sarılsam bile
I am cold even I embrace you |
| | 25 Avril 2008 07:36 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | İsyanım yanışıma ölüm bile
Susuyor
My revolt is because of my burning
even death has nothing to say |
| | 25 Avril 2008 07:51 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | |
| | 26 Avril 2008 04:44 |
| | I didn't make the first change, because I don't see any difference between your suggestion and what I wrote, but I did change it according to your 2nd and 3rd suggestions.
Is it OK now, serba? CC: serba |
| | 26 Avril 2008 07:44 |
| serbaNombre de messages: 655 | should not be "it is enough for me"?
but yours seems to me like "it is enough for you" |
| | 26 Avril 2008 08:51 |
| | No - it's "it's enough ... for you to just look me in the face". |
| | 26 Avril 2008 12:20 |
| | Good translation, kafetzou.
Congratulations! |
| | 26 Avril 2008 17:29 |
| | Thanks, my , but I couldn't have done it without a little help from my friends.
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| | 27 Avril 2008 01:15 |
| | It's validated
Bises à tout le monde
Tantine |
| | 27 Avril 2008 02:32 |
| | Merci Tantine, et bises à toi aussi!
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