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| | 22 January 2009 17:57 |
| | Hi ÅŸeyda88
The "art carrierbag" is called a "portfolio" in English .
Maybe you should put "took place" instead of "happened" and maybe you should prefer the word "technique" to "practice". This phrase is, in itself a little clumsy, maybe you could put "We were going to learn a new technique"
I have set a poll. |
| | 22 January 2009 18:21 |
| | OK. THANKS FOR THE MıSTAKES. I HAD ALREADY POINTED TO THE WORD "ART CARRIERBAG" THAT IM NOT SURE ABOUT THAT.AND ALSO IF YOU WANT, YOU CAN REJECT THIS ONE,TOO. IT DOESNT MATTER. |
| | 22 January 2009 20:27 |
| | salı günü means tuesday and that text in turkish is about turkish classes and a program of studing. |
| | 22 January 2009 22:10 |
| | so what? I didnt realize it ok?? and I edited it NOw. Is that OK Leturk? |
| | 22 January 2009 23:05 |
| | The only thing is that; "Türkçe dersinde dersin son 10 dakikası" is not translated. |
| | 23 January 2009 22:36 |
| | Hi ÅŸeyda88
Please don't be aggressive with the people who are here to help us with your text. Leturk has pointed out something that needs correcting because I asked him whether he thought the text was correct or not.
Here on cucumis we avoid using all capitals in the messages we send to each other unless we are really very angry with the person we are writing to. Writing in capitals has a very negative connotation, so please be careful how you use it.
The following phrase needs the corrections in bold made to it:
"We were going to learn a new technique in the last 10 minutes of the turkish lesson.
The "i" of "it" in the last phrase does not take a capital letter as it is in the middle of the phrase.
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| | 24 January 2009 04:31 |
| gottoNumber of messages: 3 | It was hard that there were both art and physical education today because of the schedule was changed, so we had to carry the portfolio and sweatsuits together. We were going to learn a new tecnique at the last 10 minutes of the turkish lesoon. We were going to ask questions eachother and It was going to be an oral examination and the first one took place today. |
| | 24 January 2009 14:52 |
| handyyNumber of messages: 2118 | I think this one needs some little edits:
"As the schedule was changed, it was hard that there were both art and physical education today. Because we had to carry the portfolio and sweatsuits together. We were going to perform a new tecnique at the last 10 minutes of the turkish lesson. Asking each other questions, we were going to be an oral examination and the first one took place today." |
| | 24 January 2009 17:20 |
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| | 25 January 2009 11:51 |
| | art ....> drawing
turkish..> Turkish
We were going to learn a new technique...> We are going to practice a new.... |