Vertimas - Švedų-Anglų - Oscar Schindler

Hi.

This is awkward in English and needs more work, not in terms of translation, but in terms of a more flowing English. "guess that we have all heard how one tortured..." is terrible. it would be better to say guess that we have all heard how the jews were tortured...and so on.

Ok... I give it a new try here in the message. Hope that it's better.

"Guess that we have all heard how the Jews were tortured and killed in the concentration camps during the World War II. The poor Jews were treated more like animals than human beings! And even if it's hard to believe sometime, there was also some people that differed from the multitude, people who instead of torture them, tried everything that was in their power to help and save them. One of those was Oscar Schindler."

I like that last version. Why don't you edit it like that and we will put it up for a vote.

"Guess that we have all heard how the Jews were tortured and killed in the concentration camps during the World War II. The poor Jews were treated more like animals than human beings! And even if it's hard to believe sometime, there was also some people that differed from the multitude, people who instead of torture them, tried everything that was in their power to help and save them. One of those was Oscar Schindler."

Thanks dramati!
I'll edit.

one of those sounds bad in the context, One of them would be better. ,, there were some people,, not was,, faktiskt (accually) has not been translated but been replaced with also,,which changes the context compared to the swedish text.

Thanks swe27,
I'll edit to your proposal.

Hope that you don't mind dramati!