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Inseguire e " a urmări", "a bântui", "a hăitui", am modificat eu. Acum vedem dacă şi restul e bine.

Hi!

I need a confirmation here, please! I have the feeling people won't vote enough in the next days...
I think it's OK translated, just to be sure:

"The thirst of you follows me in the hungry nights,
You're my thirst and what must quench it.
How could I not love you if this is why I have to love you.
My eyes are thirsty because your eyes exist.
My mouth is thirsty because your kisses exist.
Thirst of you. Infinit thirst. Thirst that's looking for your thirst. "

Thank you very much! Don't hesitate to correct me if smth is not right.




CC: Maybe:-)

@Ionut Andrei, dacă este "quench", înlocuim "să o sature" cu "să o stingă" - setea.

Hi Freya!
I think your translation into English is OK. Just a little thing in the line before the last one: I would have left "Thirsty of you. Infinitely (or: Endless) thirsty".
But this is valid only for the English text.
In Italian the word "sete" is correct, because we say literally "to have thirst"

CC: Freya

Yes, thank you again!