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Oversættelse - Russisk-Engelsk - Голос крови

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Titel
Голос крови
Tekst
Tilmeldt af Nanten
Sprog, der skal oversættes fra: Russisk

Белой искрой пронестись над городами
И - разбиться о серебряные скалы...
На втором витке Спирали Мирозданья
Я воскресну и начну свой путь сначала.

Мир расколот пустотой на части,
Гаснут звезды в небесах алых.
Сердце пламени во тьме власти,
Голос крови: "Начни сначала!"

Голос крови позовет тебя в дорогу,
Ты один согреешь мир своей любовью.
Этот свет - его осталось так немного.
Этот дар - его хранит твой голос крови.
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Please, I prefer the British English.

Titel
The call of the blood
Oversættelse
Engelsk

Oversat af Sunnybebek
Sproget, der skal oversættes til: Engelsk

To rush along over the cities like a white sparkle
And to break against the silver rocks...
At the second turn of the Spiral of the Universe
I will resurrect and start my way afresh.

The world is split by emptiness apart,
The stars die out in the crimson skies.
The heart of flame is in the darkness of the power,
The call of the blood: “Begin from scratch!”

The call of the blood will call you to hit the road,
You are the one who will warm up the world with your love.
This light – it is so little left.
This gift – it is saved by your call of the blood.
Bemærkninger til oversættelsen
пронестись - to dash, to rush along
Я воскресну и начну свой путь сначала - I will resurrect and start all over again.
Гаснут звезды - the stars go out/the stars die out
Начни сначала - Begin from scratch/start from scratch

Senest valideret eller redigeret af lilian canale - 6 Juni 2009 17:33





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2 Juni 2009 18:34

lilian canale
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Hi Nanten,

Could you please tell us why you rejected this translation? It hasn't been evaluated by an expert yet.

2 Juni 2009 19:22

Nanten
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Hi, Lilian.
I'm really sorry about rejecting the translation. It is correct. But I pointed to its genre: the song. The translation sould be poetic, and I might make myself the word-for-word translation.
I'm very sorry ((

2 Juni 2009 19:48

lilian canale
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You didn't mention that you wanted a "poetic" version and the translator did her best. We can't simply reject her work.
I'm sorry, but this translation will be evaluated and unless it doesn't convey the meaning of the original, it might be accepted since this translator is a pretty reliable one, OK?

I suggest you mention that preference of yours under the request for French before someone does the job and you want to reject that too

2 Juni 2009 20:12

Nanten
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ok