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ترجمه - روسی-انگلیسی - Голос крови

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عنوان
Голос крови
متن
Nanten پیشنهاد شده توسط
زبان مبداء: روسی

Белой искрой пронестись над городами
И - разбиться о серебряные скалы...
На втором витке Спирали Мирозданья
Я воскресну и начну свой путь сначала.

Мир расколот пустотой на части,
Гаснут звезды в небесах алых.
Сердце пламени во тьме власти,
Голос крови: "Начни сначала!"

Голос крови позовет тебя в дорогу,
Ты один согреешь мир своей любовью.
Этот свет - его осталось так немного.
Этот дар - его хранит твой голос крови.
ملاحظاتی درباره ترجمه
Please, I prefer the British English.

عنوان
The call of the blood
ترجمه
انگلیسی

Sunnybebek ترجمه شده توسط
زبان مقصد: انگلیسی

To rush along over the cities like a white sparkle
And to break against the silver rocks...
At the second turn of the Spiral of the Universe
I will resurrect and start my way afresh.

The world is split by emptiness apart,
The stars die out in the crimson skies.
The heart of flame is in the darkness of the power,
The call of the blood: “Begin from scratch!”

The call of the blood will call you to hit the road,
You are the one who will warm up the world with your love.
This light – it is so little left.
This gift – it is saved by your call of the blood.
ملاحظاتی درباره ترجمه
пронестись - to dash, to rush along
Я воскресну и начну свой путь сначала - I will resurrect and start all over again.
Гаснут звезды - the stars go out/the stars die out
Начни сначала - Begin from scratch/start from scratch

آخرین دارای اعتبار یا ویرایش شده توسط lilian canale - 6 ژوئن 2009 17:33





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2 ژوئن 2009 18:34

lilian canale
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Hi Nanten,

Could you please tell us why you rejected this translation? It hasn't been evaluated by an expert yet.

2 ژوئن 2009 19:22

Nanten
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Hi, Lilian.
I'm really sorry about rejecting the translation. It is correct. But I pointed to its genre: the song. The translation sould be poetic, and I might make myself the word-for-word translation.
I'm very sorry ((

2 ژوئن 2009 19:48

lilian canale
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You didn't mention that you wanted a "poetic" version and the translator did her best. We can't simply reject her work.
I'm sorry, but this translation will be evaluated and unless it doesn't convey the meaning of the original, it might be accepted since this translator is a pretty reliable one, OK?

I suggest you mention that preference of yours under the request for French before someone does the job and you want to reject that too

2 ژوئن 2009 20:12

Nanten
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ok