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27 Disemba 2009 16:22 |
| | Hi Rodrigues,
You forgot to state the bridge and the bridger's name in the remarks. Please, could you do it?  |
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27 Disemba 2009 18:17 |
| | "What can I say to you, on Monday I will leave for Romania, but I will be back. I want to know the date. You come so that we can meet. That's all. Kisses."
bridge by "Freya". |
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27 Disemba 2009 16:30 |
| | Hi Freya,
"I want to know the date. You come so that we can meet"
Shouldn't that be a single line?
"I want to know the date you come so that we can meet"
CC: Freya |
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27 Disemba 2009 17:12 |
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FreyaIdadi ya ujumbe: 1910 | Hey Lili!
Actually, the original says this way:
"What to say to you, on Monday I leave for Romania, but I (will) come back. I want to know the date. You come (so that) I see you. That's all. Kisses."
First: Eu vreau să ştiu data. - I want to know the date.
The second: Tu vii să te văd. - You come so that I can see you/ meet you.
I guess they can be united in a single phrase, yes.
I hope it's clearer now. It's an SMS and I left it in the original form with two separate phrases.
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27 Disemba 2009 17:29 |
| | OK, could you please correct the original? CC: Freya |
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27 Disemba 2009 17:30 |
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FreyaIdadi ya ujumbe: 1910 | Like to unite the phrases? |
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27 Disemba 2009 17:33 |
| | Yes, because the English version, for example, will have to join the sentences to make sense. Otherwise it seems "I want to know the date" refers to the previous sentence (I will be back)
See what I mean? |
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27 Disemba 2009 17:36 |
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FreyaIdadi ya ujumbe: 1910 | I have the original version in a comment below the original, I mean the text not corrected by me and I will leave it too in the comments area. |
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27 Disemba 2009 17:42 |
| | Good work! 
@ Rodrigues, could you please adapt the bridge and the translation now?
Thanks. |
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27 Disemba 2009 17:50 |
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FreyaIdadi ya ujumbe: 1910 | OK, now I added a "când" = when and a "ca" to make it clearer in Romanian too and it now means "I want to know the date when you come so that I can see you/meet you". |
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27 Disemba 2009 18:02 |
| | The german version adapts now to this complete english bridge-text:
"What can I say to you, on Monday I wil leave for Romania, but I will be back. I want to know the date when you come so that I can see you/meet you. That's all. Kisses."
I hope it's in unity with the romanian text now  .. |
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27 Disemba 2009 18:14 |
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FreyaIdadi ya ujumbe: 1910 | Yes, it's OK in my opinion. If you want to change the verbs which now are at future tense into present as they are in the original, you can do it too. The part : "On Monday I leave for Romania, but I come back/return." |
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27 Disemba 2009 18:16 |
| | I think it's then ok, because the act can in relation to the time speaking/writing the text to someone only be in the future... |
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27 Disemba 2009 18:17 |
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FreyaIdadi ya ujumbe: 1910 | Yes, if it doesn't change the meaning, then it's no problem. |
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17 Januari 2010 15:45 |
| | This translation looks nice, Lilian |
Tafsiri-vipenzi
Ombi hili la tafsiri ni "Maana peke yake".
- 18 Januari 2010 00:50
